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Posted: 8 years ago
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I could be yours, but I chose to be mine.

You said I was naive and you were so on point
But you see there I beat you, a clear ten to nine.

Next time I fly, just don't hold my hand;
I'd like to touch those stars.
Let me fall all the way and then try to stand.
You know how much I liked the prison bars.

Next time I dive, try not to save.
When I search for, looking past the grime
Look at me once more so I can be brave
Enough to come home in time.

You thought I was yours, but I choose to be mine.
Edited by Radhikerani - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Writing something like this after a very long time.
Hope you all like this! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Beautiful lines dear
Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Simple yet meaningful lines chottu
good work👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That's a lovely poem Pro Di. 👏
You are a brilliant poetess.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh my god
I just loved it
Keep it up
Just superb
Well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww this is so sweet, Pro!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome poem...⭐️⭐️⭐️...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a beautiful poem. Perfect ryhming, great way with words. You never fail to amaze me every time you write something. And that banner is so gorgeous. I must say, perfect layout.😉
Thank you for the pm
Sam

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely Lines Choti. ❤️
And that green banner is oh so gorgeous!

Keep Writing.

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