POETRY: It's Time [Women empowerment] - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sanskruti , what an outburst from a concerned heart !! What a message from a sensitive soul to the entire world ! Wonderful Sans [ hope you won't have any objection calling you fondly like that ..😊] Please ... please continue writing such empowering poems , we are badly in need of such discourses . Empowering the woman is one task to the modern day writers and bring back the senses ... the realization to the male mind that once he was a tiny particle in the womb of a mother , to whom he is doing grave harm perennially by raping , hurting insulting and murdering a girl as a mother , child , wife and daughter since ancient times . The mankind needs a whipping now , to the girls for their meek surrender to the insensitive male , to the men for their hazy minds to think that every female body is there for his pleasure .
Thank you for this very good poem .😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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No words to say. The correct one at the correct time.
Thank you so much.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome yaar loved it sorry for the late comment :-P
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Take a bow :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very Good Sans...

I liked the last GIF too...👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hats off.
Really, creative and powerful. That was an awesome poem.

I am really glad to see you're being strong and not letting anyone bring you down. You Go girl!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow just aesthetically written fabulous art work this is loved it 👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sagarika01

Sanskruti , what an outburst from a concerned heart !! What a message from a sensitive soul to the entire world ! Wonderful Sans [ hope you won't have any objection calling you fondly like that ..😊] Please ... please continue writing such empowering poems , we are badly in need of such discourses . Empowering the woman is one task to the modern day writers and bring back the senses ... the realization to the male mind that once he was a tiny particle in the womb of a mother , to whom he is doing grave harm perennially by raping , hurting insulting and murdering a girl as a mother , child , wife and daughter since ancient times . The mankind needs a whipping now , to the girls for their meek surrender to the insensitive male , to the men for their hazy minds to think that every female body is there for his pleasure .

Thank you for this very good poem .😊


Thanks a lot for your lovely comment! It's not that I didn't read or notice but honestly I didn't knew what to reply... I wasn't in my best place when I wrote this... I was bullied by a guy and his friends bcoz I turned him down, it was the worst experience, I was depressed and a friend told me to vent out to get over it be it writing it lyrically cos that's the thing I'm good at.
If you even felt so much then I guess the cause of sharing this is served! You can share it anywhere you want:)

And yeah you can call me Sans:) Do check my writing Index for more!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonatia

Hola Sans 😆 long time 😳 hope you remember me 😆

So let me come to the comment and must say this was a jem of poems ! Every time i read your poem i find something very unique. The words ! The way you rhymed everything about it make you poems gorgeous and the concepts ! It was such an inspiring poem ! Hat's off to you👍🏼 *don't have an hat's off emoji*😆
Keep writing more , your poems are always treat to read😳


Yeah indeed in a very long time;)
Glad that you noticed that the piece is lyrical bcoz I will call it more of a song then poem! I love pop music actually but sadly it has got no future here:(
I'll defo keep writing, have you tried my Apetalous?

BTW I'm still waiting for your Vrishaketu story!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was so happy to see you with this Poem.😊
It was Awesome Poem.😊
The way you explained what Girl have to do was Amazing.😊
The inspirational Words about Girl was Fantastic., 😊
The Whole Poem was Amazingly explained.😊
Please write like this.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks dear<3

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