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Ramya

@Ramya_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

👏 👏 Goodness, this is soo beautiful, girl!
The first piece, wow! The way you brought out every single detail about the tryst with success! The beginners luck, the obstacles, the patience and the final choosing of perfection! Phenomenal!
The second one, destiny and previous births! Very deep piece!
And the last one my personal favorite. The contradictions and irony as well. I somehow feel i have read this tale before but reading it in your words was no doubt a treat!
When are we getting the next one?

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Mahi,

Thanks so much for the PM, I never would have been able to enjoy this otherwise.

The first story - hats off to you for your creativity in describing the path we must all take (and stumble on) - when it seems all is lost, there is hope! And instead of chasing success if we strive for perfection success will follow. I loved it, so simple and yet profound as the best parables are. Something that will stick with me.

The second - eerie for sure but also very cool. I've had the feeling of deja vu before, where I thought I knew what was going to happen before it happened, but never to the extent of your experience. Thanks for sharing.

The third story - one I've heard before but I enjoyed your take on it, your descriptions were very vivid and it was again a much needed reminder, this time on what a difference our outlook makes.

Please continue with these "musings", I look forward to reading more soon!

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Shubhangishubhi

@Shubhangishubhi

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Mahi👏...you expressed it so beautifully.

I know I'm too late ,not only in reading this new creative addition of yours but also in wishing you on this blissful day(which made to bring you in our lives😛)...

Happy birthday Mahi🥳

I'm overwhelmed to have you.😳..You're the first person who I got to talk here and it was so sweet of you. I seriously am short of words here coz I feel words are inert;they cannot explain what I would want to express.Not just this year is yours...but every following year will be,because you deserve them.You deserve the best of everything best and you'll get it.Rest everything is just a minor speedbump.

Lots of love 🤗

party hard & stay blessed

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Adeeba.Ayub
I've read something similar before.
The title is tooo apt for this.
Its all about being positive and having the best outlook to anything in life.
-God bless

Yup, its an old folktale.

Thank you!

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: _Meena_
very nice work

Thank you Meenz Di 😊

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: -Wandstruck.
Ghosh Mahi that made me teary. The vision of imagination the man had was undoubtedly splendid.
Basically the whole meaning is that you need a vision, a positivity for living and if your thinking is positive you spread it around, you tend to make thousand of memories and people remember you.

#TooDeep

That's absolutely right Tweeny!

Thank you so much!

Yeah, everything here will be #Deep ;)

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
The Tryst With Success:
It was perfect
The way you described every single thing we need to do in life, all using books was simply perfect 👏👏
Mahi, you are so incredibly talented. Do write a lot more 😳

When the talent itself appreciates, its truly ecstatic!

Thank you Priye!

Glad you loved it :D

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: orion23
Mahi!
What did you do!
This went straight to the heart!
Loved it!
👏
Thanks for the PM hon!
Love ya!

Thank you Baitu!😳

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
The Call of Destiny:
Can Destiny's call ever be ignored? Never.
This was so perfect. For each of us humans are connected to the soul of the Universe, and when we sync, we will realise the mystery shrouded around us. Well written, Mahi 👏👏

Perfect! That's what it means.

Thanks a lot!

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: anonymousanju
mahi thanks a lot for pm...if u wdnt have send me pm i dnt think wd evr have read this... this os you have beautifully penned it.. read all three chptrs in one go... first chapter the words patience, success , n all were really amazing... chapter 2 was simply beautiful.. n chpter 3 god my eyes welled up... that man he knew he's goin to die but gave hope to othr one so tht he can survive... the way u described about outside scenario of window was so beautiful n pure ... ur a great writer mahi ...i really mean it ...not saying it in any flow bt bcz i've read 4-5 os of urs ..so its my experience n this one its really difrnt n butifl frm othrs.. waiting fr nxt pm..pls update nxt part soon.. love ya dear.. thnx fr such a heart touching, peaceful os :)

Thank you Anju!

I'm so glad you found it Peaceful :)

Thanks a lot!

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