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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003
Well written writeups Mahi👏
lovedd them😳
Keep them coming😳

Thanks Aishu :)

Sure!

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Glad you opened this one!

The first one is just amazing! I have never read another one quite like it! It was a truly unique presentation of long-preached advice- the safest road to success is the one that leads to perfection!

The second one, was a delightful read. Yeah, even I've had that sort of feeling before, and it was so scary, and yet so calming! 😳

The third one, is an old story. Your narration brought it to life again! It was refreshing to read it again with a fresh wealth of deatail!

Keep going girl!

Thanks a lot Pro!

The first was original, loosely based on one of my dreams. Others were based on the respective credits.

Glad you liked them!

I will :D

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Amzing thoughts Mahi😃

Thank you Nonie :)

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: ramya06
👏 👏 Goodness, this is soo beautiful, girl!
The first piece, wow! The way you brought out every single detail about the tryst with success! The beginners luck, the obstacles, the patience and the final choosing of perfection! Phenomenal!
The second one, destiny and previous births! Very deep piece!
And the last one my personal favorite. The contradictions and irony as well. I somehow feel i have read this tale before but reading it in your words was no doubt a treat!
When are we getting the next one?

Ramya Di!

So happy you read it :)

Thank you thank you!

You must've, its an old story I studied in childhood :)

Pretty soonish ;)

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

The imagination of the man was perfect 👏👏

Aptly titled Vision of the Soul Mahi 😳 You have outdone yourself in this one. I love it. This story is truly about positivity and how you should always think of life. Even if you face difficulties, one should never give up hope.

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
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The imagination of the man was perfect 👏👏
Aptly titled Vision of the Soul Mahi 😳 You have outdone yourself in this one. I love it. This story is truly about positivity and how you should always think of life. Even if you face difficulties, one should never give up hope.

Thank you Priye!😳

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Mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

The Prodding Of The Conscience

I was sleepy lazing around on the bed. It was roughly a little post Midnight. I'd been in this state this the past hour and a half. I'd gotten into bed at 10.30 , on the pretext of being sleepy and had promised Mom that I'll wake up early next morning to revise for tomorrow's Exam.But Sleep was miles away. It was playing that trick with me : wouldn't arrive when I was tired and came uncalled for when I was with my Books. For the umpteenth time I twisted, adjusted my covers, drank water and lied down. Frustrated, I got up and picked my cellphone. Maybe surfing for sometime invited Sleep for me? I knew I'd to wake up early but a little time pass would cause no catastrophe.
I opened Google. "Tap tap tap"I heard approaching footsteps. I was scared, maybe Mom had come up to check on me, if I was sleeping. I threw away the device and pulled up covers. Closed my eyes tight and enacted to be asleep. Five minutes passed by, no movement. I slowly pulled back the sheet, and peeped out of it. No one.
I sat up again, phone back in my hand. Again, louder thuds could be heard. I had to check this out. I got out of bed, no one in the Room. I slept again.
This activity was done for another five to six times, before I realised something was wrong. Given up, I decided that I'll fall asleep desperately.
Sleep came faster, I was dozing off within fifteen minutes. I woke up the next Day and recalled that incident. It was so weird that I'd forced myself to sleep in fear of some unknown approaching sound.When I thought of it hard, I realised it was my inner conscience prodding me to sleep. Surfing on net was against my promise. I'd to wake up early, this was known to it. So it was smart to hallucinate footsteps for me, which had forced me to sleep.
I wonder why do people need someone else to guide them, when your conscience itself is wide awake with you, to guide throughout. Maybe sometimes it's unheard and disregarded. All we need is to listen to it and obey it. It's the best teacher and the most suitable guide we've got.

Edited by Artist_Forever - 8 years ago

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San

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Amazing Mahi👏.

This is so true. We all procrastinate but at times - extremes to be precise, it is always our inner consciousness who help us if we hear it.

Like such situations are so similar, some feels it all uncanny but they are irony of life of how hard we try it is only us who will get ownselves on rough path.

It is easily for some to blame on the upbringing but they never tend to see what is in other person's mind.

Guess what? Where you working on a soul - awakening kinda work, I am working on a person's mind.

We are awesome as Tweenie.😆

Loads of Love

Sanju <3

PS : DO I NEED TO TELL, THAT I LOVED IT.

Edited by -Wandstruck. - 8 years ago

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San

@slippedaffairs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

unreserved^

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

On a lighter note, so very true. 😆
You're really talented you know, you depict trivial experiences like this so beautifully, and the incidents you choose are so relatable!
I just love this WU! Keep writing such amazing pieces!

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