Stronger Than Yesterday- A Collaboration updt- 14/02, Ch 7

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Arijit

@Arijit007

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

awesome, shru, please kill off harish in next update. janaki, i want raghu and krishna in action. the harry potter shout was awesome. and please, introduce yogmaya in the story.

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Janaki

@RamKiSeeta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Arijit007
awesome, shru, please kill off harish in next update. janaki, i want raghu and krishna in action. the harry potter shout was awesome. and please, introduce yogmaya in the story.

There will still be some time for the action, and we haven't planned anything for Harish yet. 😆

There won't be Yogmaya in this story, but Vimala will sort of fill that role as the Lord's little sister. 😉 She is the reincarnation of Nagalakshmi/Vimala Devi, Sesh Naag's consort.

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Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

So many points in both the chapters.

Both of them narrated many unique messages in many unique ways.Oh!The Shri-Bhu connect was amazing.Too eager for their refutation😉

All the Infants were way too cute❤️

Love the flow of the story,and the persons Raghu,Krishna and Vimala have grown up into😳

Keep updating!

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Shivam...

@Shivam...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Seriously this is jaw dropping stuff

Never seen a masterstroke of combining mytho and modern stuff

reading the two chapters , never felt like 2 different persons wrote it

I am just imagining how much thought process would have gone before writing this series

I loved chapter 2 , but have to say chapter 3 was a class apart , absolutely lovely

Sheshu and Prakriti bonding was good , and so on the same lines was even better the twins and thei sister relationship

The way you described Vimala's feminine features , as well as the brother's over protectiveness , i will be very glad to see what all effort sheshu has to do to win vimala , or maybe the other way around

Needless , to say , both chapters were penned beautifully

👏

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aanvi

@aanvi98

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

This is getting so awesome yaar!! You both are bringing all the negative aspects we're facing today- like humilliating girls, juvenile deliquency and all. It is great to know someone also sees the things like me!!

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Rukmini didi and Bhama didi , am ressing for now !!!! 😆
Because I have to give broad review on each chapter and that I can only do on computer and mom has banned me from using computer till the exams and my exams r ending tomorrow, so will review tomorrow! !!!! 😆 😉 😛

And one statement - BRILLIANT COLLABORATION IS TRULY UNDERSTATEMENT !!!!!! I M NOT ABLE TO FIND WORDS , SUPER AWESOME IS ALSO AN UNDERSTATEMENT!!!!! 😆 😉 😃 ❤️

Keep updating , it's going too good !!!!!! And [🤗]^ infinity and [❤️]^infinity to u both !!!!

With love,
Sumi... 😳 😃

Edited by Sumi-19 - 8 years ago

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aanvi

@aanvi98

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

And miss shru, when I am getting my unreses???

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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

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+ 29

Dream Weavers

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Have to read again , very interesting .

So res --

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Amaya Rishikesh

@Seraphina231

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Considering I have 4 parts to review this is going to be long 😛😛

So, about the first 😛

I loved how you both struck the contrast between Harish and Srivastan and Sujatha.

Though I resent Harish, I can very well understand his thought process, I have met someone like him. The unfortunate reality of today's society.

I love Seshu-Prakriti bonding, they are totally adorbs ❤️

In chapter 2, I loved how Padmaja's thoughts and her emotional turmoil are presented, it was written wonderfully.

Chapter 3, Krishna and Raghu I liked the bird part, it shows how thoughtful the boys are. And the Vimala and boys bonding, as well. ❤️

What I really loved about this story, is that you have started touching upon social issues from the word go. It is amazing how you are able to blend it well. And the Shri-Bhu being a part of each other, that as well. And how they are connected, in the Prakriti-Padmaja part.

Closing note, next update Jaldiii! 😆😆

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

First of all I love the pace, and the languages are so intricately entwined that you really don't feel that it is a collaboration of two people!
It's Amazing!

Part 1: The lives of the girls till their adolescence, was so very well sketched. Despite growing up in different places they've already sub-consciously identified each other and are waiting to meet. Both are fighting with their own demons and have not yet given up the hope of finding light! Beautiful!

Part 2: The boys have already grown up to be such fine young men! Both gentle and harsh, and they know when to be which! Their bond with their sister was described so beautifully! The way they dealt with the boy that had insulted Vimala, was exactly how I perceive the Lord to be- he can be terrifying, but would never strike without a dire necessity!

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