Run Aaliyah Run (New story by a new member)

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Hi friends!
I am Simi. I am a physician by profession. I am new to this forum though not to India Forums. I love to write and have written a few FFs and even have 3 novels to my credit. My website http://simikrao.com/ I like to write women oriented stories that are realistic and relevant to current life situations.

One of these stories is 'Run Aaliyah Run'-- a fiction based on a true event in my life. It is a young adult story and a work in progress. Hope you will enjoy it. Please share your remarks and your thoughts. Thanks!


RUN AALIYAH RUN

Prologue

Pain.

Some deal with it. Some don't.

Run Aaliyah Run!

And I ran. The voice-my guide- was seldom wrong. Seldom' taken with a grain of salt that is.

But right now I had no time to argue or deliberate. I simply obeyed and ran.

I ran in the dark. Always in the dark. Helter-skelter. Directionless. Aiming for a yet unknown destination away from here. Somewhere. Anywhere. Far, far away.

I ran. My feet bare naked. On streets overflowing with the rotting filth of humanity. My tender skin lacerated and torn to shreds. Yet I felt no pain. Indeed, I felt nothing at all.

I ran blind. My brain a confusion of sounds I had come to hate. I bumped into bodies some of whom grabbed at my tattered skirt. They let go when I screamed.

I ran. Away from the noise and the rough groping hands. From the barred windows and the locked doors. From the unbearable pain. I ran. I ran to freedom.

tbc


PS: please let me know what you think! Thanks!

Simi




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reserved for now 😳
I will unreserve soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow Simi di! I was strolling here when I found your work...another new story?! Do continue it di..I am eager to read yet another work of yours. If you wish...you can post it on MB Forum too...
The start is phenomenal 👏
Please please do continue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vishuv

Wow Simi di! I was strolling here when I found your work...another new story?! Do continue it di..I am eager to read yet another work of yours. If you wish...you can post it on MB Forum too...

The start is phenomenal 👏
Please please do continue...


Hi Souwmiya! Wow you found my post!
I'd have loved to post it on the MB forum. Unfortunately it's not romance.

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