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Posted: 9 years ago
@Hemaji when I wrote the intimate part, I had expected this reply from you😆😆. Afterall everyone is not Sandhya who runs the moment her husband comes a bit close to her 😆😆. She does feel happy. And as you rightly said it was not physical, it was much more emotional. 2 people torn apart due to tradition unexpectedly comes closer and they end up sharing a very private moment. I felt it to be a natural reaction of Sree-Suman for what all transpired in their lives.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sruthi di, so emotional! Everyone cares so much about Suman, and Suman cares about everyone else! Update soon, di, I am eagerly waiting!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 64- Why Me

It was midnight. The food was given to the nurse and the hospital staff only fed Suman. When he requested to see her it was told she was taking rest, now no one allowed. He had requested multiple times, but got the same answer.He got up , stretched himself and looked out through the window. He saw vehicles entering and leaving the hospital. A couple was standing at the lampshade and talking

He was waiting for her to come. It was the day after she had given him the letter in which she had confessed her love. When his class finished he had rushed to the graduate block to meet her. He saw her coming with her friend Aleena. Sreedhar knew Aleena as many times Aleena had accompanied Suman during her dance practice. She was wearing a green salwar with duppatta tied as a knot in the neck and her hair braided. She never let her hair open in college. It was either bun or braided.

As they came near Sreedhar approached them. Seeing him Aleena stepped back. Suman didn't look straight at him, she was blushing.

" Suman if you don't mind will you come with me to lover's corner. I would like to talk to you"

She looked at Aleena and indicated her to proceed to hostel and then followed him. They were silent till they reached the lover's corner. He got a corner seat under the shade of pine trees for them. They sat facing each other.

" Thank you for accepting my love. I am really happy " told Sreedhar. She only smiled still didn't look up.

" Sumi are you afraid " . She looked at him startled. " Can I call you Sumi. It feels very personal " he asked

She nodded. " Sumi will you tell something or just I will talk " he asked

" I have a question. Can I ask. Will you feel bad " she said

" First how can I say if I will feel bad without knowing what is the question. Second if you think I feel bad on you questioning me don't worry, you have the right to question me. For the relation we are going to share there should not be any confusions or assumptions in mind"

She smiled broadly looking at him. He put forward his hand. She gave her hand. He indicated her to come closer. She kept her head on his shoulder. He held her hand .

" Sreedhar from the time I have come in this college I have heard your name. Most of the girls in this college wants to be your GF. There was not one soul in the hostel who had not shouted at me for asking the question on why no trial for Sreedhar Varma for Jodi Dance. Having so many girls who will fulfill any demand of yours to be your GF and future wife what did you see in me to choose me as your love . What is so special about me"

He thought for a while and replied" Sumi you have an independent thought process, you don't take hearsay, then even in adverse situations you make effort to adapt and give your best. I had given up hope on winning the Jodi dance. But your patience and determination ensured we won not only the dance, but Jodi also. All this made you different from the rest. Then if you really ask me why you, at this point I do not have a clear answer. But I promise you the day I get it, I will let you know "

" Sreedhar Varma you want to see Suman Varma right. Just go now as it is duty change time. You will have some 10-15 mins before the next duty nurse come. Come out within that time limit. Don't disturb her. We cannot allow someone during duty time in ICU. The head nurse will give us punishment if she catches us"

Sreedhar thanked the nurse. He slowly entered the ICU. He found Suman. She looked as if sleeping. He sat down beside her bed and kept his hand on the bed and looked at her

" Sumi I have your answer. Why you. But now you are sleeping. Sleep, take rest. I am happy that you are fine" he told in mind

He tried to get up, only to feel her hand over his. " Sreedhar going without telling anything to me" she whispered.

He smiled at her and she gave a feeble smile " Tell what you have come to tell me. I can read your face" she told

He caressed her hand " Sumi I have the answer to your question " why you". " Really tell " she asked eagerly

" You said girls will do anything for me if I ask. But I wanted someone who will give what I want the most without asking,Sumi do you know if something had happened to Aakash today I wouldn't have been able to face Tilak Bhaiyya and Renu Bhabi. I would have felt guilty of my love story bringing pain to them. But with your grit you saved me today from that guilt. Sumi in college putting you for that Jodi Dance was an injustice to you. Because you asked a question. I couldn't prevent that injustice and was helpless also as I was also pushed to a corner as far as the dance went. But you didn't think of the injustice to you, that day you adapted to the situation to dance with me for the sake of the college and your answer to the injustice meted out to you was that perfect dance which won 1st prize and best Jodi.

You are the girl to whom life has given a raw deal. Instead of complaining you had tried to make best use of the deals given to you. I wanted such a girl who could fight alongside with me in any adverse situation. A girl who can make a defeat into victory. A girl who will complete me. A girl who will know what my priorities are and support me. By protecting Aakash today you just proved my choice was right then, my choice is right now. "

She smiled as he tucked her hair behind her ear and told he needs to get out before the duty nurse came. She nodded. As he stepped out of ICU he turned to look at her once again. He saw her smiling, a smile that held the satisfaction of knowing what she meant to him.

Edited by shruthiravi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the lovely update Shruthi. I knew that you will make them connect emotionally further than physical intimacy at this juncture. they have crossed that urge now as the situations have made them mature and they know clearly that they are for each other and there is no doubt in that and they have progressed so much that they need not have to hold hands to feel the other. Just with a glimpse, with thought they connect now.

I loved this platonic love and adoration between them. There is no need to be a hug to express his love for her or her trust for him. They have found that on that crucial moment on Jagratha day. The goddess had given them an opportunity to find each other in a divine way and they are satisfied now.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks Jaya. Actually I had tried to bring in contrast between the 2 men in Suman's life. One her father for whom she is the only child. Ideally to be cherished and pampered. But she is like a discarded piece for him, unwanted, just that she exists so he does whatever he feels like doing for her. She is that piece of furniture for her father whose presence is never acknowledged.
The other man, her love is the one who has woman standing in line for him. An eligible bachelor in every way. Whether you take the girls in college or the chances of alliances coming to him through family. Best of families, girls pretty and rich want him in their life. He can choose anyone. And he chooses her, decides to walk with her, decide to dedicate his life for her. Among many she is the most beautiful flower he adores. Showing how special she is. Not to be discarded, but to be adorned
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update.. I like the nurse who found a loophope and allowed Sree to go in. Sree and Suman are so adorable.. his reasons for her qs.. and her knowing that he wanted to say something.. amazing..

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Posted: 9 years ago
@Ria sometimes answers to certain questions come at the most unexpected moment. But one thing is sure. The heart never lies. Maybe we might not see a immediate logical connection. But if we listen to it one way or the other it will give answers
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Posted: 9 years ago
Letter from suman is lovely. It shows how much she is loving him. good that he shred the note.
Shree speech is inspiring.his word will hit the target definitely.
So harikishore is using mahantji .hope their plan will backfire and poornima unite with family happily.
Did they intentionally attack akash as he is tilak son.
Suman is so brave.
Whole family feels for suman.
So now it is turn for shree to take care of suman.
Flashback part and shree's answer are beautiful.
They r growing slowly to a matured couple
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yes Hemaji. You know me right. I will always give character growth. Because I believe you evolve when you pass through circumstances and that evolution should be positive and never negative.
It had nothing to do with Tilak. They wanted a child of Varma family. When they came Aakash was the only one available
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yes shruthi. Postive character growth only give the success we want. Shree and suman has failed in their but this positive growth not only make them successful but also brings a huge change in the society. Only a positive person can do that.if not for society at least in the family which may bring more change in the future .just like maheshwariji doing.she gave her positive thoughts to her kids.now those kids bring the change in the society.

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