EKAKI CH.10:THE END:P.15

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gmgi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

DD you are a versatile writer. Today itself I read 3 different updates. Each one is unique in its presentation.

Feeling for Bindiya. She is forced to leave her present n only relation - her mother n for what? An opportunist? Waiting eagerly for the next update. Will she find happiness?...

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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: gmgi
DD you are a versatile writer. Today itself I read 3 different updates. Each one is unique in its presentation.
Feeling for Bindiya. She is forced to leave her present n only relation - her mother n for what? An opportunist? Waiting eagerly for the next update. Will she find happiness?...

Thank u Geena 😃

EKAKI was my first attempt. In fact I had written this as a script 😆 but I find proofreading editing and improvisation boring 😆 so am putting it as story...

And no one is reading it 😭

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Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Who said no one is reading!!!

It is awesomely interesting!!

The emotions in this chapter were Fab!!!

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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: SenRazia
Who said no one is reading!!!
It is awesomely interesting!!
The emotions in this chapter were Fab!!!

😆

I didn't know you were reading anu. Thank u 😃

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gmgi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

DD give some time to everyone yaar. Hinglish takes some time. I read it immediately because I am already hooked to the story. So even if it is in Japanese I will try.😆

Edited by gmgi - 9 years ago

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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: gmgi
DD give some time to everyone yaar. Hinglish takes some time. I read it immediately because I am already hooked to the story. So even if it is in Japanese I will try.😆

😆

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Ankita.11

@Ankita.11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Janhavi diii...I LOVE YOU!! (normal wala,don't consider something else😛)

This story was so beautiful!! And you have brought in so many social issues together. Wow!

And you know bengali???? I thought you were a Marathi... but your bengali is so good...have you been to Bengal or are any of your relatives bengali??

UPDATE asap

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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Ankita.11
Janhavi diii...I LOVE YOU!! (normal wala,don't consider something else😛)
This story was so beautiful!! And you have brought in so many social issues together. Wow!

And you know bengali???? I thought you were a Marathi... but your bengali is so good...have you been to Bengal or are any of your relatives bengali??

UPDATE asap

THANK YOU ANKITA..😳 I LOVE YOU TOO...

AM A MAHARASHTRIAN AND I HAVE NO BENGALI RELATIVES 😆 I HAVE NEVER BEEN TO BENGAL. ARE YOU BENGALI?

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Ankita.11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: daydreamers

THANK YOU ANKITA..😳 I LOVE YOU TOO...

AM A MAHARASHTRIAN AND I HAVE NO BENGALI RELATIVES 😆 I HAVE NEVER BEEN TO BENGAL. ARE YOU BENGALI?

Believe me,your bengali is flawless... initially,i thought maybe I would have to point out some mistake,but you did not give me that oppurtunity😡 😛

But,tell me where did you learn bengali??

And yes I'm a bengali 😊

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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Ankita.11

Believe me,your bengali is flawless... initially,i thought maybe I would have to point out some mistake,but you did not give me that oppurtunity😡 😛

But,tell me where did you learn bengali??

And yes I'm a bengali 😊

this was 🤣 worthy like ssly 😆 i didn't know you were a bong 😆

as i said this was written like a script. so to get that feel i had to bring in the lingo. there was no point using english for dialogues that too in that era. plus i love languages. actually i have a knack for it 😆 even if i don't know the language i figure it out very easily what the person is talking about. i ges that's the reason ppl have difficulty to recognize me 😆 they refuse to believe that am a maharashtrian 😆

whatever bengali i have used here i have learnt it from google baba and some basic sites.. 😆

baki kahi se nahi.

phir bhi i thot there will be grammatical errors. honge toh batao.

and am sorry i didn't give u a chance to point out mistakes 😆