EKAKI CH.10:THE END:P.15 - Page 10

Oops!!!! Sorry attu I forgot that 'aai' chunk 😆

Originally posted by: SenRazia

I feel so sorry for Durga, she is clueless..

And Anika, she is jealous ;)

I love how you connect the flashback and the modern story...

Please be back with a new one after these 2 parts!

Something like Ekaki 2 😆

Originally posted by: attubaby

Part 2: wowieee...Nani is awesome😛 ...Rajjo masi b badi advanced h..RISHTA WAI SOCH NAI😆😆😆...convos among the three were just so cool and casual...loved it...and this Jai..oh he z so caring munda..lucky Ani😃

Originally posted by: attubaby

ohhk.😆😆..well then personally i shd wait for some Rajasthani Chunk, as m from Jaipur😉

Only two more updates??????First read d last part so shocked at this line!!!I thought there is much more that we should know!!!Anyways, Anmol intentions r unclear...Its good he said Durga's salary as half in his house(but not gauranteed becoz what if Anmol's dada cross checks???,,just my thought)...Big blow is Anmol hiding abt his first marraige from Durga(I was thinking why Anmol is still bachelor at that age in those days(1950's)...So got d answer!!!Lets see whats in store for Durga!!!As u said is its not a fairy tale, I am prepared for d worst!!!Go on Jai make Anika jealous!!!Boss ka kya chakkar hai???? Many questions but no answers!!!So waiting for d answers!!Update soon!!!

Originally posted by: ajay227

Only two more updates??????First read d last part so shocked at this line!!!I thought there is much more that we should know!!!Anyways, Anmol intentions r unclear...Its good he said Durga's salary as half in his house(but not gauranteed becoz what if Anmol's dada cross checks???,,just my thought)...Big blow is Anmol hiding abt his first marraige from Durga(I was thinking why Anmol is still bachelor at that age in those days(1950's)...So got d answer!!!Lets see whats in store for Durga!!!As u said is its not a fairy tale, I am prepared for d worst!!!Go on Jai make Anika jealous!!!Boss ka kya chakkar hai???? Many questions but no answers!!!So waiting for d answers!!Update soon!!!

Originally posted by: daydreamers

Kesariya balam aavo humare des 😈 Ohhh ho!!!

Khamma ghani bai sa!!!!😆

I'll have to think a story 🤣

Originally posted by: attubaby

ghani khamma.. 😆😆...thari bhasha ri pakad ghani chokhi chee😆

bring it on babes😃

9. REVENGE

*

Flashback starts*

Kabir- chal jai mere sher. Iss dare ko toh pura kar.

Jai runs to susan with a rose in hand.

Jai (kneels down)- will you be my valentine?

Susan-yes, why not?

*flashback ends*

Anika steps out furiously. Jai desparately searches for her.

Jai- anika stop. Ruk jao yaar.

Anika- kyun?

Jai- you are drunk. Haalat dekho apni.

Anika- go shake a leg with susan. Stop troubling me.

*Flashback starts*

Anmol brings durga at his house.

Bhabhi- dewar ji ki khushi me hi humari kushi hain durga.

She presents her shakha. ( type of bangles that new brides wear)

Bhabhi- ack hi hain, par aj se hum tumhe apna maante hain.

At the temple

Durga- maine kaha tha aapse samaj ke liye yeh bandhan ho na ho mere liye atoot hain.

Anmol- toh phir?

Durga- hum isi mandir me maa ko saakshi maan kar saath phere lenge.

The pandit of the temple asks anmol to adorn durga with shakha and paula. ( red and white bangles just like "chooda" in north india.)

The rituals begin and they eventually marry.

Pandit blesses them.

Pandit- aap jaye apne bujurgon ke aashirwaad se apne naye jeevan ka aarambh kare.

Durga- ji inke maa baba hain nahi aur mere baba bhi. Maa bhi mahine pehle guzar gayi.

Anmol shockingly looks on.

They depart for their home.

Durga- yeh kaha laaye hain aap?

Anmol- ab se yeh hain humara ghar.

The night possessed a strange silence. The silence of love,silence of peace, silence of stability that durga had missed for years.

Durga surrendered herself in anmol's arms uniting with him for a lifetime.

*flashback ends*

Jai- ajeeb hain. Jab tujhe propose karta hoon toh mana karti hain, baat na karu toh peeche padd jaati hain, kisi ke saath dance karu toh bhutte ki tarah jalti ho.

Suddenly jai felt moist lips brushing his lips. Shocked at such sudden approach jai lost it to anika.

Anika- I love you jai.

Jai- I love you too.

Nani's place

Jai- ani, ghar pahuch gaye.

Anika was leaning over jai's shoulder.

Anika- nahi yahi accha lag raha hain please mat jao.

In the dawn

Jai- ani.

Anika gets up, holding her head in hands.

Anika- hum log kaha hain? Gaadi me kya kar rahe hain?

Jai- raat ko yahi aankh lag gayi thi. Chalo jaldi. Aj ka aakhri din hain.

*Flashback starts*

It was 3 years that anmol and durga were staying together. Talks of their relationship were all over.

Durga- hum dada aur bhabhi se kab milne jayenge? Aapne bataya toh tha na unhe?

Anmol- haan, ab teen saal huye hain shaadi ko kaise na batata.

2 years ago

Durga- aap dada ke yaha ja rahe hain?main bhi chalu? Rehte toh hum alag hain lekin hoon to main ghar ki bahu hi na?

Anmol- main aj baat karta hoon. Tumhe phir kabhi le jaunga.

At anmol's house

Bhabhi- dewar ji kya hua? Hume toh laga tha shaadi ki khabar aap jaldi sunayenge.

Anmol- iraada toh tha bhabhi. Par mujhe yeh pata nahi tha ki durga humare saath kya khel khel rahi hain.

Anmol's brother: matlab?

Anmol- usne yeh shart rakhi hain ki shaadi ke baad apni har maah ki aadhi tankhwa wo uske maayke degi.

Bhabhi- ki? Kaun kaun hain uske ghar pe?

Anmol- maa baba toh chal base. Teen bhaiyon ke parivar hain. Factory toh hain unki lekin itni kamaayi nahi aati waha se. Bas maine keh diya ki iss shaadi se mujhe aitraaz hain. Shartein mujhe manzoor nahi.

Anmol's brother: accha kiya. Aurat pair ki jooti hoti hain chahe ghar baithe ya naukri kare use kabhi badhava nahi dena chahiye warna sar pe baith jati hain.

*Present*.

Durga- accha yeh saari kaisi hain?

Anmol- acchi hain. Par kyun?

Durga- asocha aj milne ja rahe hain toh yahi pehnu.

Anmol- kinse milna hain?

Durga- dada aur bhabhi se.

Anmol- bhool jao.

Durga- kya?

Anmol- haan tumhare shartein manzoor nahi hain unhe.

Durga- par yeh baatein toh teen varsh pehle hi ho chuki thi..

Anmol- haan lekin woh baat aur thi.

Durga- tumne toh saari shartein maan li thi tabhi toh hum teen saal se..

Anmol- haan maani thi maine shartein tum se badla lene ke liye. Uss din ke thappad ki kimat chahiye thi mujhe. Tumhe main majnu laga jo itni beizzati ke baad tumhe khushi khushi apni biwi banaunga.

Durga- aisa mat kaho, maine didi se bhi baat kar li hain. Wo kuch dino me aati hi hongi.

Anmol- arre meri maa toh mana kar do unhe, mera peecha chodo aur iss ghar se dafa ho jao.

Durga- main saari duniya ko bataungi tumne kya kiya mere saath.

Anmol- jao batao, par kaun maanega? Koi gawah nahi hain iss shaadi ka. Wo purohit bhi pata nahi kaha hoga. Kaun sunega tumhari dukhbari kahaani? Aur shor bhi macha lo, bhulo nahi naukri karti ho tum. Kya izzat reh jaegi tumhari? Tch tch tch tch...

Durga leaves his house remembering all the moments that she had spent with him.

It had been a week for this incidence.

Again they were the talk of the office.

Durga- bas ab ek hi raasta hain.

She goes to her boss.

Boss- yes come in.

Durga steps inside.

Boss- kahiye miss roy kaise aana hua?

Durga- sir ek darkhwast lekar aayi hoon. Main mr. chaterjee ke saath kaam nahi kar sakti.

Boss- toh?

Durga- ya toh unki transfer karaye ya meri.

Boss- par..

Durga- sir please. Naukri chodne ka mera iraada nahi par tabadala karva dijiye aap please.

Boss- main dekhta hoon kya kar sakta hoon. Aap jaiye apna kaam dekhiye.

Everyone in the office knew what had prompted durga to take this step, but no one dared to utter a word about it.

Keeping in mind of the good record and dedication of durga, boss decided to transfer anmol to another city.

Durga's home

Charu- par yeh kaise hua?

Durga- dhokebaaz tha wo didi. Aap uss bare me bhul jaye ab. Mujhe koi baat nahi karni iss bare mein.

*flashback ends*

God..this is really a twist!!!!Anmol is such a liar and creep!!!!He played with Durga in d worst way possible!!!Hats off to Durga for her strength and courage that she started to accept it as it is!!!Anyways, happy for Jai-Anika but I hope u wont spoil their story like of Durga-Anmol!!!!As u said there is only one more update, I am waiting to read whats d purpose of d flashback story and how d present one ends!!!Update soon!!!