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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Res

*pheww*
Read 6 chapters.


You have to read them or you read them? 😈 with this comment you sound tired 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Loveforlife

Finally read all the parts! Beautifully written.. I loved the Jai Ankita part! Also very well written part 6 in which Shantaram dies. Great Jhan!


Thanx a ton Rav 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gmgi

DD waiting for the next part.😛


I'll try to update today Geena 😛 was out the whole day.. And then I slept 😆 got up juz now. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

10. THE END

Anika- how tragic that must be. Cheee... That bas***d..

Jai- aur phir umar bhar durga akeli rahi.

Rajjo- haan.

Anika- par aapko inki kahaani kaise pata.

Rajjo- mere chacha bataya karte the. Ab toh na wo rahe aur na hi durga.

Jai- thanks aunty. We really think this is of great help.

Jai and anika take her leave.

His phone rings.

Jai- its roy.

Anika- haan tumhe batana bhul gayi thi. He had called up. Bata raha tha boss puch raha that tere bare mein.

Jai- bullshit.

Anika- iss baar kya kiya tumne?

Jai- ek min.

Jai attends the call and comes back.

Anika glares at him.

Jai- what?

She looks at him questioningly.

Jai- wo maine boss ko bola ki agar ye story hume cover karne de toh unka 4 days 5 nights ka program fix.

anika- tumhari kisi model ke saath kyun?

Jai- hmmm. Kya karta yaar maan hi nahi raha tha toh bas hawa ka rukh badal diya.

TEZ KHABAR office

Jai- so what should we call this show as? "durga"?

Anika- no, ekaki...

Jai- matlab?

Anika- lonely.

Jai- suno rajjo ko bulaya hain maine show ki shoot dekhne.

Anika- aunty se seedha rajjo? Not bad.

Jai- who hain bhi utni cool.

The shoot gets over.

Rajjo- ani, this is for you.

She gifts ani a jewellery set.

Jai- mere liye?

Rajjo- this is for you..

It's a traditional ring.

Anika- but yeh sab?

Rajjo- award samajh lo. Mujhe ye kahaani toh kaise bhi logo tak pahuchani thi you both were the medium.

Jai reads the name on the box- durga jewels, Kolkata.

Rajjo nods.

Anika- toh yeh?

Rajjo- haan, reh gya bolna. Factory thi na raja ki? Kuch saal baad uska durga jewels ho gaya. Unki future generations ka income.

Anika- yeh bhi aapko chacha ne bataya?

Rajjo- yeh to maine khud dekha hain.

Jai- toh aap?

Rajjo- raja ki sabse choti beti.

Jai and anika remain stunned.

The show goes on air.

Anika hosts it.

"women empowerment kehte hain aj ke zamaane ki bala hain, lekin kaun yeh jaane yeh toh sadiyon se chali aa rahi hain. Main anika le chalti hoon aapko aise hi safar par jo shuru hua 1924 mein. Iss zamaane ki toh bas azaadi ki baatein hoti rahi, angrezon ki kahaniyan banti gayi, par aisa kya hua parde ke peecche jaane mere yaani anika ke saath.

The story continues...

V.O.

Aaye ho akele iss duniya mein, jaoge tum akele, kaabil banao khud ko itna ki tanhaayi se lad paoge, ekakipan ko durr kar paoge. Log toh bas jariya hain mann ko rijhane ka, akelapan toh khud hi mita sakoge.

Roy- kamala ka response mila hain ekaki ko and the credit goes to you ani.

Anika- mujhe nahi. You should thank jai for this. Par vo hain kaha?

She receives a text from jai.

" apne padosi ke ghar aao."

Anika- idiot.

Roy- jao he must be waiting.

Evening jai's residence

Anika knocks the door only to find it open. The hall is lit with candles.

Anika- jai.

Suddenly someone grabs her from behind. She screams.

Jai- its me.

Anika- yeh sab kya hai?

Jai kneels down in front of her with a ring in his hand.

Jai- will you marry me?

Anika- yes I will.

Jai- itni jaldi maan gayi?

Anika- you have lighted so many candles idiot. Sab kuch band hain, m sweating like hell. Please jaldi pehnao and get it over.

Jai- badi selfish ho.

Anika- durga kaisi lagi? Mujhe laga nahi that um iss story ko cover karoge.

Jai- hmmm, actually main bhaagne wala tha waha se but I felt something similar with durga.

Anika- as in?

Jai- ummm dekho na main bhi akela toh hoon, ma pa the but both were so budsy in their individual lives. Even durga was alone throughout her life. Nobody to share what she felt.

Anika, holding his hand- par tumhare paas me hoon.

Jai- I guess that's the only difference.

*THE END*


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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a Kamieenaa that anmol turned out..:( at least Durga was strong enough to leave him for good.. and anika and jai were so cute with their banter :)

loved it.. Janhavi thanks for making me a part of this..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rupsii

Such a Kamieenaa that anmol turned out..:( at least Durga was strong enough to leave him for good.. and anika and jai were so cute with their banter :)

loved it.. Janhavi thanks for making me a part of this..


The pleasure is mine 😳 btw this got over.. If any time I think of ekaki 2 you have to stalk my thread 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chalo acha hai..Atleast Jai&Anika were happy and together at d end!!!!So Durga is Rajjo's bua!!!Great!!!Atleast Durga's cousins gave her d due respect for sacrificing her life for them!!!(Naming d shop after her)...Its truly great of Durga to accept d conspiracy of Anmol to defeat her and moving on!!!Thats what is real women empowerment!!!!Hope u come up with season2...Thanks for d PM...otherwise I would have missed a beautiful story!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ajay227

Chalo acha hai..Atleast Jai&Anika were happy and together at d end!!!!So Durga is Rajjo's bua!!!Great!!!Atleast Durga's cousins gave her d due respect for sacrificing her life for them!!!(Naming d shop after her)...Its truly great of Durga to accept d conspiracy of Anmol to defeat her and moving on!!!Thats what is real women empowerment!!!!Hope u come up with season2...Thanks for d PM...otherwise I would have missed a beautiful story!!


Thanx Jay!!! Cmn to part 2 I'll have to think, cz as of now am working on complexities. So ekaki part 2 will take tym 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks fro giving an happy ending to Anika & Jai. I was worried. And so much I had guessed that Rajjo is a family to Durga but had thought she was Her sisters daughter and not brothers daughter. And it was nice of Rajjo to bring out her aunties life sacrifice and show the world that a girl if decided can build a family and a man if decided can spoil a family (life).
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: deejagi

Thanks fro giving an happy ending to Anika & Jai. I was worried. And so much I had guessed that Rajjo is a family to Durga but had thought she was Her sisters daughter and not brothers daughter. And it was nice of Rajjo to bring out her aunties life sacrifice and show the world that a girl if decided can build a family and a man if decided can spoil a family (life).


yes jaya 😊 even when i haven't proofread this story, its very close to my heart. maybe because its my first work.. 😳

thank you for being in this journey till the end. 😃

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