::The Karma Cafe:: {Update 1/18 Pg 20}

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

WOW!! wonderful start dear...loved it

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Ohhh interesting concept
Love to read it,

Agar yahan update nahi karogi toh I will stalk your wattpad account *evil grin*

So be a good girl a d keep updating the good works

Thanks a lot for pm
Update soon

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Good start...
continue soon..
thanks for the pm

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

interesting update
continue soon...
well written

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Diya

@foreverlazy

Dazzler

+ 19

Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Wait a minute?! When the hell did you update this, and why am I only now reading it?

You know what, never mind. I'll yell at you when it's not 12AM, and when I'm in front of an actual computer.

Anyways, I am loving this story! Keira is violent, as promised. Elliot is a flirt, also as promised. And I love this idea of a karma cafe.

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Sana

@SaNa_sTaR

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Wow...your concepts are always really interesting to read!

Loved the character sketch

The first chapter was awesome...loved how they showed that guy his place!

Eager to read more...update soon :)

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Heatsha8176

@Heatsha8176

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

nice one
Keira dealing out the punishment to Marcos for slapping a girl
whilst Elliot adding in his idea for justice by getting the girl who got slapped to slap him back
take it cole has arrived but does he know keira??
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

First welcome back
Please don't disappear again
Superb update sanaya
That was really something
Love it yaar
I became fan of this karma cafe
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon