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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Ru...again a WONDERFUL POEM👏👏
Loved this one too😳
Keep writing like this...
Eagerly Waiting for your next work...thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: glitter..girl..



The flaws are perfect
Because of the innocence they reflect


The last lines, your italicized ones, are the best of the lot!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

<font color="#0000FF">Nice poem!
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Thank you.. 😆
Edited by glitter..girl.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: -SanjanaSobti-



I said what I felt honestly 😃 You are awesome at this!


Heeheee
Ok ok again thank you...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Rish_Rubles

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Its beauuutiful, specially the last two lines <3</font>


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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Desirable_Star


Ru...again a WONDERFUL POEM👏👏
Loved this one too😳
Keep writing like this...
Eagerly Waiting for your next work...thanks for the pm😃


Thank you divu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Aquiline



The last lines, your italicized ones, are the best of the lot!!


Thank you soo much Lin..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: SeharishFatima

wow awsum poetry its too good


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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
First poem is amazingly written
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Lonely Journey


The roads were unclear
And surrounded with the fear
Still I kept going
With the owls howling

The night was dark
Without any spark
It reminded the betrayal
Because nothing is fair

I was waiting for dawn
To see flight of swan





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