poam no 3 : Lonely Journey (page 14)

Originally posted by: glitter..girl..

Cold whispers...



In the shattered pieces of glasses
. I can see many faces
. Every piece has a different story
. which lead towards the
. Unsolved mystery


. collecting them is my fascination
. but shattering has become
. their destination
. how I loathe this longing
. still it is my homecoming


. Tears are soaked
. felling are choked
. still I smile
. And try to make
. Every attempt fertile...

Originally posted by: -cuteee.tigress

Amazing! Keep writing!

Originally posted by: Aquiline

Originally posted by: Keechu_SwaRon

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#333333">Amazing👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#333333">A great choice of words, and they beautifully arranged.
Fine writing...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#333333">Keep writing dear.👍🏼</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#333333">Keechu</font>

Originally posted by: glitter..girl..

. Cold whispers...



In the shattered pieces of glasses
. I can see many faces
. Every piece has a different story
. which lead towards the
. Unsolved mystery


. collecting them is my fascination
. but shattering has become
. their destination
. how I loathe this longing
. still it is my homecoming


. Tears are soaked
. felling are choked
. still I smile
. And try to make
. Every attempt fertile...

Originally posted by: Keechu_SwaRon

I loved these lines, It showing the pain of a broken heart, and a strong person.😳

and great rhyming ..👏👏👏

Keechu.