SS: The crystal; Chapter 2 on Pg 16

aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Amazing start👏

continue soonish😊

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Sadhana

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Pro

Awesome start I am intrigued to know more

You write well

I want to know who the boy is and what does the crystal mean to him

Continue very soon please

And the banner is just gorgeous

Edited by Sadhanamomo - 10 years ago

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Jini Tracy ;)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Gud update...
By the way who is the boy?

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Surya_krsnbhakt
Your language is beautiful.
Like the first part. Wonder what he will do with the crystal.
BTW, is the boy someone we know?
Or is he your creation?

And er, I know you said this is not mythological, but will we get a glimpse of him? Or at least her? Or both together... but that's unlikely, considering that she has to wait for 100 years...
Anyways, do as you wish (but please keep this request in some corner of your mind while writing?😳)

Thank you so much Bhaiya!
You don't know either of them and you've got to wait till the story starts!

About glimpse, I don't know, I wanted to keep this away from religion altogether, but I might, you never know. But do not expect please, because most probably I won't. I'm really sorry about this haan!

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: .Enchantress.
Bful Start Proteeti..❤️ Love Your Language and The Intricate Detailing! ⭐️ Thanx fr pm.. Continue Soon.

Thanks Shanayadi! I'm glad you liked it!

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Godly_Affection
Wow! Beautiful Banner dear!
loved it
Prologue is fantastic!
The little boy finds the crystal, it's so beautifully written!
seems really interesting!
do continu soon
thanks for pm

Thank Nehadi! I'm happy that you liked it! I will post the first part ASAP!

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ..BlackSwan..
nice piece of writing Prateeti.. Whats the connection between the boy & prince? I guess there is some..
continue soon.. Thanks for pm.

Thank you Swagatadi! Maybe yes, maybe no. You'll understand soon! 😉

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sonatia
This just so adorable and nicely decorated with your words..very well wr8en.very excited for the next updt.

Thanks Mou! I'm glad you liked the prologue!

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Priyanka.saha
I so love ur writing style
Beautifully penned down
I loved it
Wonder what he will do with the crystal
BTW DIdi we know him???

Aww! Thank you so much!
No, you don't know him, and I'm no Didi!

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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