The Moon Child

All through the sunny blue sweet hours

I swim and glide through waters green

Never by day the mournful shores by me are seen

But when the gloom is on the wave

A shell unto the shore I bring

And then upon the rocks I sit

And plaintive sing

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Well it was my first try so plz ignore the errors

Hope you all liked it

Do leave your comments plz

Originally posted by: dinazz

lovely ! 👏

amazing and beautiful ! 👏👍🏼

i loved the way the poem flows ..

the writing is small and contained but is a lot in it self ...😃

i love the touch of rhyme that it has !👏

do write more like these ..

😃

Originally posted by: aditiarakshi

awesome poem

really loved it

thanx for the pm

😊

Originally posted by: Devilicious

WOW...

am also a poet..

and i must say it was marvelous..!

u can be a good poet

thnx for the pm and keep writing.

do pm me if u write anyother poem :)

with love Ramisa.

Originally posted by: SHADESOFNATURE

Fantastic u wrote as professional poet

Keep it up

Originally posted by: rima4ever

nice poem