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Inna bada comment...Inna bada kabhi update bhi nahi diya hoga tune kabhi.. kidding...I love it when readers are so articulate with the writers, it helps us in getting better and moreover motivates us to keep up the work, that by some miracle you find good enough to spend your time on. Aur tu toh meri best friend hai yaha..toh I always want to be articulate and honest with me, no matter what.
Originally posted by: kritika_24
Okay! So finally I am here with my comment!😛
so that I don't forget all the things, I have decided to write them down in points :PHaan.. finally you are here..I was getting so impatient to read your comment. 😛so point no. 1Finally you posted something! If not the emotional one, at least this one! and I love it even more coz this came as a surprise to me! I had absolutely no idea as to this piece and even when you asked for the title suggestion, i thought it was going to be some random drabble or anecdote you wrote... BUT THIS DUDE!!!! proud of you babe :PYaar..bas I couldn't help it..mere dimag mien ye idea such din se groom raha tha and I had to pen it down. Phir jab ye final hua toh I was so happy with it that I wanted you to be the first one to read it..isliye maine tujhse half an hour manga tha tab..and you were the first one to read it. Aur maine tab bhi bola tha na..I know you too well, tu khush na hoti ek anecdote se toh I had to think harder, pehle maine sirf Samaira aur Rudra ke beech ka scene socha tha aur a jealous Krish.2. The title- IT IS FABULOUSLY AMAZINGLY STUPENDOFANTASTICALLY SUPERBBB!!!!! Inni badi cheez bold tune..☺️ trust me! you couldn't have got a better title for this one! and jealousy se related title toh kabhi acha na lgta! I have reasons to like this title- see, you haven't mentioned any names in it, you haven't told which character has this going on his mind. I was so worried about the title..par you liked it...yeyyy!!! and in the story, both rudra and krish wish shilpa could be theirs.. I mean samaira.. and its innocence and honesty is what will force people to open the topic and give it a read! Shilpa 😆 Maine toh socha bhi nahi tha uske bare mien ye likhne se pehle.. agar..acha feedback aya..toh I promise..main sabke saath apne saare writings share karungi..no scratch that..some..for sure.Waise Jess wants me to open a blog of my own and not write on the forum. Par its okay..tabhi some kaha hai.3. The characters- okay, I love samaria's introduction and all... this sunny dress on an archiect already made me feel like she was a heroine... and then though rudra was her friend and all, she did look bubbly to me. since I had already decided to imagine shilpa, she was perfect. Chalo..Samaira pass ho gayi..dairy milk kha le uski taraf se.and krish, well... I don't really like him as much I like rudra. I mean, I couldn't find a hero figure in him. and somewhere I felt that you feel the same BECAUSE of his name! i don't know why, but if any two guys krish and rudra are standing, rudra has to be the nore mature one and krish has to be the one who thinks from the heart. and in this case too, all along krish thought from the heart, had innocent love and rudra seemed to be like the one who would come and finally take samaria.pata nhi ab likhne me aisa lg rha h jaise krish's love is more pure... but still...and do you know I even have a real life friend named Rudra kapoor!oh and the name samaria is so beautiful❤️Yeh main tujhe batah chuki hun chat pe..main yaha publicly nahi bol sakti..agar maine iska sequel likha toh sab ko patah hi hoga ki kya hona hai..isliye let the suspense remain ki end mein kiski wish puri hoti hai :p4. The emotions- no word for this point. I don't have to say anything. I am dead as dead could be. Man I could so connect with each of them! and although I have never experienced anythhing like this, I could still feel how they must be feeling.. you were fab at capturing each emotion just perfectly! each of the three were right in their places and there was no villian, and yet I could find it all perfect. there was chaos of thoughts and emotions and yet I could feel it all so clear. Main pass ho gayi..chal isi bast pe ek aur such meetha ho jays 😉5. the story- well it was simple, and I still think that if it wasn't for your style of writing and the way you mingled their emotions, I would have found the story a little too close to the reality, something I won't prefer. But lets not go there since we have already discussed it. So anyhow, I think it was intelligently simple, you knew you wanted to focus on the emotions and the plot and you did it perfectly! I hope I could drape you to your wishful escape through the story..real but not so real at the same time.6. dedication- well... I LOVE YOU TOOO!!!!! SO SO SO SO SO MUCH!!!!!!!!❤️❤️ 🤗P.S- ab jab khaata khul hi gaya h IF pe... toh keep more one shots coming 😉 Well, I will try. 😊and last me ek typical IF comment.. please.. read this :lovely os dearthanks for the pmcontinue soon😆😆😆
Typical comment ke liye thank you so much 😃you are my ⭐️Oh that reminds me, PMs will be sent out shortly.. pakka promise!PM!! PM!! PM!!and love you!Love you too, three, four, five, infinity...!!!
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