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This poem was entered in the concluded Wings of Ink Poetry Contest and has won the Reader's choice Runner-up award. Thank you judges and thank you everyone who has voted for my poem. 😃
Reader's choice Runner Up - Entry 2
Theme: Love And Hate
Title: I hate you
In a world full of dishonesty and deceit
With animosity and abhorrence all over replete
You entered my life proving otherwise
I hate you for removing my veil of despise
My tears had dried, my heart had hardened
No news affected me, joyful or saddened
You melted my heart and released the fears
I hate you for giving me many happy tears
It seemed innocence was an age old thing
Everybody's actions calculated and conspiring
Your innocent eyes brought back my smile
I hate you for making me feel alive
You taught me to love and see the good side
You brought out the human in me that was trapped inside
Confess my love, shouts my inner voice
I hate you for leaving me with no other choice
In a world full of dishonesty and deceit
With animosity and abhorrence all over replete
You entered my life proving otherwise
I hate you for removing my veil of despise
My tears had dried, my heart had hardened
No news affected me, joyful or saddened
You melted my heart and released the fears
I hate you for giving me many happy tears
It seemed innocence was an age old thing
Everybody's actions calculated and conspiring
Your innocent eyes brought back my smile
I hate you for making me feel alive
You taught me to love and see the good side
You brought out the human in me that was trapped inside
Confess my love, shouts my inner voice
I hate you for leaving me with no other choice
Judges Marks
Total 75 marks (25 per judge)
Judge A Judge B Judge C Total Votes
16 17.5 16 49.5 12
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