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Nida Javid

@NidaJavid

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#541

Superb n amazing update :) loved it

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#542

res

unresing

amazingg update tashu

the plot is geetin interesting after each update

but the best thing is the intensity u wrote in the chapter

on one side u showed thr concern thr care for each other

n in the other hand u showed how the goons were at the back of them

breaking thr moment

mujhe patah hi nahiu chala wen the

chappy ended tat too wit another twist

curosity is eating me away

i hav only one thing to say

do update soon 🤗

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Sanjana

@sanjana.sanju

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#543

it was really a thrilling update. Ella helpd him aww ie so cute. She sure no to answer him back. Ryans care fr ella is surly increasing day by day. Dos goons r gng to fire dat place o no nw wht.. Cnt wait fr next update, plz update dis so as possible

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princess1926

@princess1926

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#544

Wow... Ella helped him... Awesome...
Really thrilling... Update soon

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skfirdous

@skfirdous

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#545

wow awesome update
loved it
ella helped him so nice
omg fire
update soon

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#546

omg the way ella is taking care of ryan haayeee sooo nice!!!

they are super cool with eachother!!!

pehle toh she saving him and then those unknown emotions for him!!!

this girl is crazy!!!

and so is the guy!!!

i was expecting a kiss when he pulled her towards him 😳

and oh my gosh ryan is soo strong

it was like ella is hurt and ryan is taking care of her

but then those guys

arrrggghhh

poor ryan and ella they had to run sooo much!!

and now fire 😲

ab kya hoga inka!!

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Deboleena

@OtakuGirl-Debo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#547

OMG dear...awesome..love the whole update..so much thrill...and now I can see something 😉 between this 2...good going..😳...loved the moment they spent alone when Ryan was injured and Ella taking care..ah so cute and romantic and also you expressed their feeling so well that I can t feel them..👏...n now I can't wait for next chapter...fire,action...and romance may be..😉...but loving it so much...

and also all the best for your upcoming exams...👍🏼

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@navk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#548

wonderful update
i know there is no need to tell u about this
taani saved rey tht was amazing
& so nice
wow rey back on his action mode good to see that
last part was scary

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#549

Outstanding update
I like how Ella did everything to save Ryan
Ryan acting like he is hurt and Ella panicking only for him to burst out laughing was amazing
Aww Ella crying without realizing it was beautiful. It only shows how much Ryan meant to her
Both running for their lives was awful. I love the way Ryan was holding Ella wrist when those idiots plan to get to Ella first. Before those jerks came Ryan and Ella share some lovely moments
Omg! Fire 😲 hope Ryan and Ella get out of there before they set the place on fire
Entire chapter was amazing. I love it...

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Manahil

@...Mallu...

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#550

Outstanding Work !!⭐️

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