A One Man Army ||~Season 2~|| - Page 53

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Oh man! I just love your action sequence
The way u describe every details is fanstatic
Ryan talking to the "unknown" guy was sad. I hope he recover soon
Ella is too cute, I can only imagine her facial expressions that she made on seeing Ryan in front of her lol
Ryan and his smirk is too cute.
Fab update, I hope Ryan get well soon as well and Ella by his side he will definitely recover ;)


Thank you so much
I m glad u liked the fight part
Lol yeah she is cute
Yup u r right he will b fine cause she will b wd him 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nidaTaarey

Ossum n superb update :) loved it eagerly waiting for the next update


Thanks a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Raj-

omg!!
this was so good!!
you surely know how to keep your readers hooked!!
excellent work!!

thanks for the pm and scrap:)


Thanku
I try 😉
U r welcome :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kriti094

Omg this was an awesome updt
i really wanna who this unknown pov guy
ryan n ella r too cool
i love their witty comments
i really hope ryan gets fyn soon
n ya i m looking fwd to more action and romance :-)


Thanks a lot
Will reveal soon :)
I m glad u liked their comments
I hope u like the future updates
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taarey05

awesome chapter
who is this unkown person
n i think he knows where ella's brother is
omg what happened to ryan
cant wait to read next chapter
update soon


Thanks
Will hv to wait to find out 😉
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anj_taarey

Sry fr late rply...m vrry busy wid clg...
Amazing updt...luvvd it...d chp ws vry interesting...
Wow...action n romance is gonna increase now 😳 ...waiting eagerly fr d following chps...updt soon 😊


It ok
Yup it will increase
Will do soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deboleena.manna

hey m back n here is my review for Chapter 6

I just loved it the whole Kyle,Rocky and Ella scene...and you described the sequence very well and also do justice with Rocky...and I love this type of Anti Hero character so I love Ryan/Rocky...😳


soon I will read the next chapter and give you my comment..and that last line from your note I guess it's for me..😆😆


Welcome back
Thanks dear
I m glad u like rocky role
Okie dokie
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deboleena.manna

here goes my review for chapter 7

OMG..what a chapter..I just fall in love with Elly(Ella + Rocky 😉)...Rocky start to fall in love..wow..I just love those story where Boy fall in love with the girl and then make sure that the girl also fall in love with him..you know passionate one..😳...what a scene..love Elly's cute conversation...and then the fight was so good...I can understand how Ella felt when she saw Rocky like that n it's natural that she is scared of Rocky...but her fear and bcz of that step back from Rocky make Rocky feel like heart broken or someone stabbed his heart is so sweet and when she scream Ryan..aw...now the love story will start...good work...👏👏


Thank u so much
Aww i like such stories
Lets see how this one goes 😉
I liked their last thoughts too
Him feeling like stabbed n her screaming <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: armaanasadksg

Sorry 4 d late comment Dear. Awesome update


Its ok thnks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: princess1926

Sry 4 d late comment...
D update was fabulous..!!!
It was awesome... Loved it...
Update asap


Thanks
N its ok

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