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Mary/ Penname: Zoe

@KrazyRedMary

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Hi Baee! Im finally here to comment.*phew* Sorry had to get somethings done before. So how should I put this nicely... I really.. truely... honestly.. beautifully... loveee it!!!!😃😃 I love the whole concept and I can't wait to know what happens that changes everything. Also what happened 10 years ago? Im really curious to know what secret of Scarlett did Riley found out at that time...🤔

So Im really looking forward to her meeting some guy in tuxedo tonight also. That would sweet!😃 I love her mind talk. It is so... what should say... me!😃 I can so totally relate to her. I would never go this ball either.🤢 Chalo so she went. Cool! I also wonder what happened that they fell apart.

What happens in the Ball???? I really really want to know! I have so many questions and new answer. So update super fast. I really want to know what happens in the ball and then I will give you super long comment.😃

With lots of love,

Red.

Edited by CrazyRedMary - 10 years ago

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

I liked the introduction of you more than the prologue that is! So you dwell fairly between being pissed and being un-pissed(again if that is a word!!) And then its a wonderful start Sanaya...(I know this for the fact that you can be called anything but I'd really like to know how Sanaya got her name!!)

The story with only a prologue has build on its intrigue! That Vaughn-girl(sorry her name slips me!) seems to be too much of a story in herself...and not forget that Summers-girl(yes I know what you might be thinking; but then I am no Sheldon!!) is like the A-grade vamp out of the teen fics! I'd love to read more as to know what's the story behind this masquerade...and more importantly why is it red!!!

Edited by Meself - 10 years ago

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princess1926

@princess1926

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Interesting concept...
Waiting to read more

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Divyana maheshwari

@divi_divyana

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Interesting story nd nyc prologue.. Update soon nd pm me

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Nice concept👏

n prologue seems interesting👍🏼

update soon😊

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Interesting...
continue soon..
thanks for the pm...

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Sana

@SaNa_sTaR

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Wow...this is really interesting Sanaya😃...u r a really good writer😊

Loved the prologue👏

And your authors note😆

Do continue soon...really want to read further😊

Edited by SaNa_sTaR - 10 years ago

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sabreenxz

@angelsabreenxz

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

amazinggg concept loved the fiction...plzzz pm me😃

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Diya

@foreverlazy

Dazzler

+ 19

Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

This story sounds amazing!!!

You're such an awesome writer.

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Interesting story line
liked ur explanation at start about her take on mascarade balls
can't wait to see what's gonna happen next
is the bad boy gonna turn out to be our prince charming
thanks for pm plz keep em coming N continue soon

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