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Posted: 11 years ago
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POEM : As a pen writes a poem

As a pen writes a poem..

You write my life..

As an idea creates a story..

You create my life..

As the notes shape a music..

You shape my life

As the brush paints a picture..

You paint my life

Like the fragrance of the flowers

You are the fragrance of my life..

Like the rays of light of the sun..

You are rays of hope to my life

Like the pillar to a building..

You are the strength to my life..

Like a diamond in a jewelery..

You the love of my life..

You give me strength..

You shape my life

You give me love

You the diamond of my life

You keep my hopes up

You add music to my life..

You paint it wonderfully..

As if its your own life...



Just a random one !!

Thanks for reading !!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow its really awesome
u write very well
each and every line meaning is touched my heart
keep writing
thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome poem...
loved it
keep writing..
merry christmas
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You write really good sweetie!⭐️

Its just awesome!👏👏👏

Miss your writings dear!😭

Take care!🤗

Your choco loves you a way too much❤️
Edited by Angelic_Friend - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You're back with this amazing poem of your. I loved it! Please do write more! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its amezing angel...loved it..
Really happy to see ur wrk after long time... 😊 😊
Awsm poem...meaning ful and heart touching. .. 👏 👏 👏
Keep rocking angel...
Thanks dear for such a beautiful poem and for pm ...
Miss you dear a lot.. 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it's awesome...
loved it sooo much...
I know u r an amazing writer always...
keep rocking dear😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb poem ..! 👏
luvd it alot .. 👍🏼


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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowiee yaar ..
its jst amazing..
beautiful thought yaar..
luvd it...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u r amazing !
as a river flows effortlessly ... u write poems !!

howz this one 😉
in ur poem way 😆😆
awesome 👏👏

love ... reyna

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