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Posted: 11 years ago
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Poem: If Only... Then Maybe...

If only you knew who I really am..

If only you knew who really I was...

If only you could relate to me

If only you could see deep inside me like before...

If only...

Then maybe you would have understood me...

Then maybe you would have read my emotions..

Then maybe you would have understood my unsaid feeling

My expressions and my emotions...

If only you would have seen me like before..

If only you would have spent time like before..

If only you would have talked to me

If only you would have listened to me..

If only you would have not left me alone...

If only...

Then maybe everything would have been fine...

Then maybe I wouldn't be alone..

Then maybe even I would have had a happy life...

Then maybe even I would have someone to talk...

Then maybe I would have not been the person...

That I am today...

Then maybe...

If only you had reached out to me

If only you had pulled me close...

If only you had held me tight...

If only you told me everything would be alright...

If only...

Then maybe I would have felt safe...

Then maybe I would have felt protected...

Then maybe I would not have been hurt...

Then maybe I would have been me...

Then maybe...

If only you had taken the time to find me,

If only you had stopped for a minute and thought about me.

If only...

Then maybe I would have known that you still cared...

Then maybe I would have known you still loved me and wanted to help.

Then maybe you would've been able to save me...

Then maybe I would have been saved...


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my_angel... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
I'M FIRST HIPPIE
AWESOME WRITING👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Awesome poem dear
Loved it superb
Keep written more
U written very well

Thanks for pm
madhuharini thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
brilliant job...
please continue ur writings😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I will use some of these in my siggies .
Loved loved loved loved it


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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
awesome poem ridzi
keep writing...
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
you know what rani how i felt after reading this poem
i felt like cry i mean it consisits so many emotions,lonliness, pain everything
and i can understand what you want to say through this poem
your Dii is here na for you always n forever in your heart haina
be happy
keep smiling like a shining star ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A Cry For Help

I cried out for your help,
With my heart, soul, and body.
You watched me go under,
Not bothering to reach out and save me.

I screamed for your love.
My eyes betrayed every feeling,
Every need for someone to care.
But you only watched my suffering.

I choked on your unkindness,
Stopped breathing, stopped thinking.
Closing up my lungs, my throat,
Until I could no longer stand it.

I'm gone...
And now you regret it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Once again supr awsm poem...
Lvd it alot...
Keep rocking...
Thnx alot for pm dea...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
wow!!!
DHANNO!!
u r soo good at this!!!
i love it!!!
tanxs 4 the PM dear!!!

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