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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey friends
😛 helloo sheello ji 😆 , kaise ho aap sab , i know acchhe hoge , nahi to koi baat nahi , meri poetry kar degi aap sab ko acchha 🤣 , yaa shayad full to bore 😆😆🤣 still try 2 enjoy hahaha ..k. (sorry na aadat se majboor hai aap sab ki ye dost 😛😛 , isiliye to baar baar aap sabko pareshan karne aajati hun 😛😛 but what can i do , i love u all buddies soo much) 🤗
ok i m here 2 present ur all my 2 new poems , some of u have read but some have not 😛as they r a part of my new stories 😉
😉

1)" uss chand ko dekho to zara "

uss chaand ko , dekhoo to zara ,
haa uss chaand ko dekho to zara ..
raaton ke andhere main , chaandni bikherta hai,
kabhi gumnaam hai vo to ,kabhi chamakta hai .
kuch vaise he hum bhi gum ho jaate hain apne, gamon main ...
par chamakte hai hum chaand jaise, khushiyon ke baadlon pe
khushiyon ke baadlon pe ..
par ye bhool jaate hain hum ki
chamakne ke liye,
uss chaand ko bhi baadlon aur toofano se ladna padta hai ...
aur laakh taaron main usse akele he rehkar chamakna padta hai ,
apne liye khada hona padta hai ...

dekho na daag to uss chaand par bhi hai ,
par isse band vo chamakna nahi karta ...
aur phir vo chamakta hai ,
aur sabko andheri raaton main
chaandni deta hai ..
aur kaali raaton main sabko vo raasta dikhlata hai ...
ek ajeeb baat uss chaand ki ye bhi to hai ki
chalta hai vo har kadam par , hamare sang sang ,
jaise chalta ho , vo khuda hamare sang sang
rehta hai chanda sang hamare , rehta hai chanda sang hamare ~ har pal, chahe aaj ho yaa kal ,
par subah hone par vo chanda , chup jata hai sooraj ke ujaale main
jaise hamara khuda chupa ho hamare chote se dil main
haa chote se dil main
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" agar poem samjh nahi aaya then go n read d update 😆😆😆 , i hope u will understand then, here is d link 2 that story -

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2) KAISE KARUN MAIN TUJHSE PYAAR
aitbaar , aitbaar , ...
kaise karun main aitbaar ..
aitbaar , aitbaar , .. kaise karun main aitbaar ...

kaise karun main tumse pyaar ,
haa kaise karun main tumse pyaar
toote hue mere dil ke tukdo se kaise dun main tujhko pyaar

inn andhero main meri zindagi ke ,
kaise dun main roshni , tumhe savero ki,

jab mujhe khud pe aitbaar nahi ,
apni zindagi pe vishwas nahi ,
to kaise thamun main tumhara haath ,
kaise thamun main tumhara haath
jab main khud dard se sehami hui hun ,
darr se phir kaapne lag jati hun
to in kaampte hue haathon se kaise thamun main tumhara haath

kaise sajaun main sapne tumhare sang ,
jab meri khud ki zindagi he
ek dard bhara sapna hai , jo kisi bhi pal toot sakta hai ...

kaise de dun main tumhe apna dard ...
kaise apni adhoori mohabbat ko ,
aane dun main tumhari khushiyon ke raaste main ...

jab har pal dua tumhari khushiyon ki maangti hun ,
to kaise tumhare dard ki vajah main ban jaun

...kaise kar lun main tumse pyaar ,
kaise karun main apni zindagi pe aitbaar , kaise ...
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ok friends this poem is a part of my new tarey os , here is d link , check if u wish or wanna understand my poem 😆😆😆


ok i guess aaj ke liye maine apko bahut paka liya , so main chalti hun

pls do like n comment agar dil kare aap sabka to 😛😛

ab main chali ,apne sapno ki gali lalala 😆
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tareyfan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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for d vry first tym i m resing for poems🤣 bt otta go nw ..so kl aake padhungi ..n me first 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That wasen't boaring infact it was nice. Loved it chundolly😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing dii
second wale hai meaning aapki sory se samaj lungii😃
first wale ka toh samajh hei liyaa thaa😊

aur bhi likhoo dii
keep writing!
love u dii🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Mohina 😊
mind blowing poems
simply loved it ❤️
the poems have so deep meaning
really amazing yaar
it is penned down very beautifully
how can u write so brilliantly haan
u r a brilliant writer
just loved your work ❤️
so congratulations for writing a masterpiece 👏
keep up the great going on 👍🏼
and do write more bcoz u know it feels so good to read them...

love
Mehvash

Edited by dashinggirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I read it two times to understand it completely😆
but they were so nice dii :)😊
keep writing :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dear main bata nahi saqti tum kitni khoobsoorti se likhti ho...
u r truey blessed my sis!!!
keep writing more
love u lots!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful poem moni 👏 😛
Love it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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vry nyc
you are vry talented
Edited by -Pulkit.. - 11 years ago

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