Created

Last reply

Replies

29

Views

2.8k

Users

9

Likes

50

Frequent Posters

NonComposMentis thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict


Sometimes that is the reason I feel I should not let you read it beforehand. Ah well, I might just do that. Possibly... But hey! I help!...in some way...

He is going to be witty. He has to be. Well, he better be. he has to live up to Benedick now.

I've put a lot of love in both the characters. And a lot of "me" too. Woh toh I know. :)

Thank you for saying Rhythm seems real. It means a lot.

I fell in love with quote when I read it.

Thank you. I don't like being thanked. You're welcome, anyway, though.

NonComposMentis thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#12
I suppose you're right...
Having read and said all I wanted to does take the charm away from the comment...
Then again, that's for you to decide...

What had I said about Danielle again?
Ah yes, I like her.
Reminds me of a senior of mine... I miss her...

And Mair, yup!
Grows on me, definitely.
He's so Benedick. <3

I told you I loved the moment between him and Rhythm, didn't I?
It's short, yet it just means so much, regarding their future.
Don't ask me what now, I can't explain.
Looking forward to their interactions, with the sass on Mair's part too. ;)
And yes, I still say I like this better than the prologue.
Expectations, y'know?
Better live up to them now.
Though you will, but phir bhi.

There!
Sorry for the delay! :O

Mugs.

Effervescent_R thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Preee. . i!!
surprised to see me here?
I hope not!!
anyways coming to the FF. .
its always a task to write the 1 st part. .
making sure it grabs one's eyeball n complete attention. . dont u think?
N trust me gal u succeeded in doing both effortlessly!!
the prologue itself is quite intriguing!!
looking forward to the next part!!
Effervescent_R thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#14
coming to part 1. .
so here they are finally meeting each other in person. .
though brief. . it was quite an interesting one. .
an accidental one eh?
interesting
naddiya26 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 12 years ago
#15
thx for pm

loved the start ...


Thats.me.Guni thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Amazing beginning... Lukin forward to read it further... Do pm me d nxt parts plz.
Dreamer3003 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#17
beautiful start👏
its interesting😊
waiting for d nxt part😳
CoffeeAddict thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: NonComposMentis

I suppose you're right...

Having read and said all I wanted to does take the charm away from the comment...
Then again, that's for you to decide...

What had I said about Danielle again?
Ah yes, I like her.
Reminds me of a senior of mine... I miss her...

And Mair, yup!
Grows on me, definitely.
He's so Benedick. <3

I told you I loved the moment between him and Rhythm, didn't I?
It's short, yet it just means so much, regarding their future.
Don't ask me what now, I can't explain.
Looking forward to their interactions, with the sass on Mair's part too. ;)
And yes, I still say I like this better than the prologue.
Expectations, y'know?
Better live up to them now.
Though you will, but phir bhi.

There!
Sorry for the delay! :O

Mugs.


I thought I won't make you read it the next time I wrote the part, but then again... Sigh. Well I guess it's because I'm so confused at times.

I'm still building up the characters around the two protagonists. They're still raw. Not as well thought and conceived as Mair and Rhythm.

It took me time to like Benedick. Mair is like post-egoism Darcy. A subtle Benedick. A well read Peeta. I think you get my drift... He's them and more. Well he's a lot more. 😳

I love writing moment between Mair and Rhythm, the spark of life just ends up there when they talk. Honestly these two seem more just my mind's creation. Well I can talk to lengths about them.

I hope I make it up to your expectations.

Love always,
Pree
CoffeeAddict thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: -Serendipity-

Preee. . i!!
surprised to see me here?
I hope not!!
anyways coming to the FF. .
its always a task to write the 1 st part. .
making sure it grabs one's eyeball n complete attention. . dont u think?
N trust me gal u succeeded in doing both effortlessly!!
the prologue itself is quite intriguing!!
looking forward to the next part!!


Not at all Rads!! I was hoping to see you here!

Thanks a lot!!

This story is very close to my heart. So thank you!
CoffeeAddict thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: -Serendipity-

coming to part 1. .
so here they are finally meeting each other in person. .
though brief. . it was quite an interesting one. .
an accidental one eh?
interesting


Thanks. Ah yes, accidental, but important! 😉

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".