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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: surprising

keno bon hisabe ki kharapta korlum😕
Didi's vivah-23th jan'09⭐️
se takhon Msc final yr,ami cl 8😳

na na boner toh right---birthright didir khatay poem lekhar.😃

ar didi kolkatay----kothai mba korche re? amio bhabchi CA hoe gele mba korbo finance e

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Susmita

@surprising

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

na na boner toh right---birthright didir khatay poem lekhar.😃

ar didi kolkatay----kothai mba korche re? amio bhabchi CA hoe gele mba korbo finance e

han etai satti😉
ekhon or saaab khata-patra amar jimmai,ja i6e korte pari
kharap ki6u to korini

didi distance e mba kor6e re...tui nischay distance e korbi na??

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: cheesemad
what a lovely poem...
indeed hope is the ultimate winner...
thnx for the pm...

welcome my 1st poem reader😃

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: sohara
wow amazing.
hope is the basic instinct of human.
I loved how you emphasis the most important feeling of human being so beautifully.

aww...is it??😳
thanks😃

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

A Rainy Desert

...At the time of bidding adieu I can't help being fascinated by her...actually not by her...her tweets full of pain made me stand speechless...

You're leaving me...
With a suppressed yearning in your eyes
Tell me my dream-man,tell me...
How could I live without you??
Though a floral barrier separates us-
We're the constant couple with the language of silence.
You're in my heart-in my soul...
How could I sever my heart from me??

I's trying to avoid the call of heart so boldly that I replied-

I'm a futile man with a ocean of dream
I've a conservative heart like a dark chamber
My eyes are seemed to be amazing but actually dead!
I's not the right choice for you...
Don't hope against hope my nymph.
Like a mirage... I fascinated you once upon a time
...that's all...
Don't fill your eyes with precious brine
Surely some1 awaits you with colourful butterfly.

So leave a completely finished man with the confusions of life & enjoy your own life free from his shadow.

Edited by surprising - 12 years ago

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