Surprising Poetic Corner: Silent Sun-quake - Page 48

Originally posted by: panchaali

wow what a thought!!!

I have to read it thrice to understand the whole inner meaning

awesome thought!!

Originally posted by: surprising

awww...tomai onek dhanyabaad⭐️

Originally posted by: pvejani

very nice poem...love it.

thanx for pm.

 Ever Lasting Adieu

Person:

The red sky symbolizes the STORM'S EYE
My mind wants to achieve a void sky...
In which there will be only sigh,
But none of them containing a drop of lie.
Blue tears i.e. purer drops make a heart dry-
That is waiting to get alive by a hearty try.

Lady:

I,awaiting with frozen tears,your Helen

I know, you never air your pain for me...

And--and--your love for me--your caress

I can feel it--1000 years ago..in your eyes

I'm in love with your soul,the magnificent one.

I've died everyday living every moment for you---

I,I...a nil entity without you...

Person:

Remembrance pains me a lot
I, a warrior with my 1st & last introduction...
Was never bothered by physical grief..
But,at the end of my life-journey
I'm in the black whole of mental pain
That is truly unbearable to me...
The throne had turned THORN longer ago-
Now, I'm seriously breaking down...
My power of devastation comes to engulf myself...
I feel why I'm not dead till now!
Because...my signature...the valuable thing then ME.
...O...my abbreviated biography in the lotus petals...
Just a foolish reflection of my subconscious mind...
Which deals with a MAN-NOT AN EMPEROR.

Lady:

I'm here my life,to soothe you with all I have

But you!!...please come on my love...in my lap...

I'll not seduce you,I'll just love you,care for you...

Please forgive me my Sandro,give me a last chance.

I,your Helen,want to die with you,but...

Our child---our unborn child,your sign on me

Calls me for life that is death without you---

You're tired my lord,I know--but

I've lost the right to serve you.

For me, you have to bear agony

That snatched your charm towards life...

Return my lord,my whole entity is on tenterhooks

To touch your paining soul..if you consider me!!

Don't get angry with me my lord...I'm too in pain...