Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile - Page 51

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

wow amazing👍🏼..beautiful❤️❤️..thanks for the pm😃

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

lovely 😳

keep writing more

thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: LoveToLaugh

I picked up on this thread so late! 😔

You are definitely on your way to the third thread! Congratulations!

I read the first two poems and they are so beautifully written. "Unseen hearts are undefined." I told you once how much I loved this line. This is almost your signature line and why not! And I loved that tribute to your mother too. Again, I think you use imagery very well.

Btw, did you write the friendship poem yourself? The one at the beginning of this thread? If you did, kudos to you! 😳

P.S. Will be back with my comments on the other poems soon!

Originally posted by: prateekdave7

Beautifully penned and amazing description of thoughts of a lady and a person..I know its related to previous poems..And i like the continuation with this..Its like a beautifull poetic SS..

I like the title Love making hatred..And its really true in few cases..Just loved the way u expressed the feel,emotion and a fear of a person as well as lady..The lady's POV is pretty amazing and she is right..I like the statements of person most becoz its written very well..He is also right..

Now its really interesting to read further..
So great wok dear sister..
I am waiting for next Convo..
Thanx for PM

Prateek

Originally posted by: surprising

thanks re😊
it's ok😳...no need to say srry

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Kobe Update Korchho ?

Originally posted by: surprising

korchhi dara...kaal/porshu

Originally posted by: Vidhi1989

res

Originally posted by: Moner_Radio

rumpu :

OMG so this is actually between CGM and Helen ? superbly written👏 .. coz it holds true for heart-broken people across time and ages !