Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile - Page 42

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

" I'll love you the best I can. I'll forget you if you want"

These two lines says all.What can I say more except that its soulful.You always make me tongue tied with ur poetry.Love them

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr

Hey thnx for d pm,
loved d update.
Very emotional
Beautifully wriiten.
Cudnt have been more better.
Update soon

Originally posted by: prateekdave7

Emotional and heart touching poetry..I loved it..
The emotions and the feelings of a women is completely and perfectly justified..
Just great work.Keep going..
Sorry i am very late..
Anyways,Thanx for PM

Prateek

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr

Hey thnx for d pm,
loved d update.
Very emotional
Beautifully wriiten.
Cudnt have been more better.
Update soon

Originally posted by: Roxxy47

Again a Heart-touching poem it was ...

Nice choice of words , well woh toh har poem mein hota hai...

Beautiful poem 😃...

Specially the last stanza 👍🏼...

Loved it ❤️...

N thanks for the pm 😊.

Originally posted by: Rainbow_petals

loved it.

you portray each and everything so beautifully

cheers for p.ms

UNCONQUERABLE EMPEROR

The only certain thing is uncertainty.

And the key is hope.

Hope can revive man

Hope can kill man.

Everyone is warrior,

War means nothing but destruction.

But hope is there too.

Hospital is favourite of none.

But it offers you care when you need it.

So hope is there too.

Hope is a wide door...

We all live with an eye on hope.

Hope is life, hope is death,

Hope means peace, hope means friend.

Hope means what we dream of

This assures our heart...

Surrounded by many a lot unruly soldiers-

Hope is THE ULTIMATE EMPEROR.

are really beautiful poem dear...that's ur 1st poem??

I can't believe it😉

really meaningful😳

will comment on other poems asap

Stand In Time's Eye

My dead heart doesn't know what to do...

It still wants to get alive with your warmth

But...the light of truth darkens its leafy desire...

...Now, it's the time to bid adieu forever...

Sunbeam or iceberg- what awaits us beyond this world??

Belief is just an apparent word

Truth is so atrocious & loves to jeer...

I can't help depending on you

Though I want to sever."

The night is foggy violet

Dew drops share a warm hug with the pearls

Untold words perform a silent cry...

What if the eyes're deprived??

Uncertain colourful brine of ours

Forms an ocean full of compassion &...conquest!

...Melodious pain is greater king than me...

I & my part...my part & I

Seemingly to be apart...but...

Our relation lies in frozen tears-

Just like the rainbow & the rain...

A bright beam makes difference between us.

Life is a beautiful thorn

Likely to be a soft thunderstorm...

Full of ablaze brine with pink fire!

If you're in the ocean of tears or happiness

Or even of beam or snow...

...The only certain thing is uncertainty...

Evolution of something

Two thousand years ago,

I've loved a love

A heart spread arms to another

I've written a letter

To that pseudo-unknown heart.

Thousand years ago,

The heart got hurt by me

I've wanted to wipe tears

She showed me a mirage

To find a real Wesis.

Five hundred years ago,

My sky-minded nature began to fly

Towards Paradise lost

Towards the heaven of troy

To feel the beautiful heart

Hundred yrs ago,

Her heart achieved Titanic-love

Mine was hesitating a little bit

I've handed her over the letter

Too late or too early??

Now,

The water of love

Becomes frozen by something unseen,unknown

We, along with rather love

Staying so far to recall ourselves!!