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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everybody! My pen name is RK. I used to write Fan Fictions, but never found it compelling to write about chick-lit romance. So, here is my attempt at writing a story of my own, with my personally-created characters! I have been drawing charts and making sticky noted for this since past few months now. 😆 Hope it's worth reading...or scanning, as you may prefer. Please bear with me! 😆

[I am not going to send out PMs to everybody, because 1. I have more than 450 people in my list, and 2. I don't want to send out PM to people who I know are certain to ignore. Those who did receive a PM, I am sorry for bothering you!]

Criticism will be appreciated.

PS : It is a love story!

Prologue

No one really remembers exactly when Professor Dhiren Verma had first arrived in the neighborhood. Nobody asked who he was, and nobody bothered with the greetings. The house he had occupied was always quiet and punctually dark after seven in the evening. He was a ghostly figure who had nothing to talk about. Those who saw him were the early birds. He would step out of the house before sunrise, lock the door and walk away to the city's college.

It was not very surprising when the more than half of the students didn't know the old man either. He always stayed in his research lab, occasionally finding solace in the library reading ancient books about early kingdoms. A very little was deciphered from his actions.

On one particular night of mid-summer, he was startled when a knock interrupted his calculations. He put down his pencil, and walked out into the living room to open the front door. A man stood there, looking at him with grave eyes.

"Professor Verma?" He asked with clear urgency. Professor Verma nodded, a frown never leaving his forehead. The man pulled out a packet from his shirt and handed it to the bewildered professor. The stranger then turned around and walked away into the darkness with acute steps. Professor Verma closed the door and looked down at the packet in the fluorescent light. His face turned grave as he recognized the symbol embarked on the manila cover. He quickly broke the traditional seal and slid out a single piece of paper.

Professor Dhiren Verma,

His majesty will be sent under your guardianship on the second Saturday of May. Keep him safe.

The Royal Palace

(Written: 17th April 2013)

Professor's eyes read over the words again and again, until the comprehension was completely settled. He took a deep breath and put the letter back in its place. Then with tentative steps, he returned back to his calculations.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserved <3

Will be unreserved by Friday 😳 Pakka!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Eee! *giggles*
Finally I got something to stalk in IF😆

I always liked stories which were original, which were your characters, where you have the freedom to do whatever you wish to do with them.

The grave silence of Professor gives a glimpse of the shadows of his past. And the letter though didn't give him ample excitement, it did the magic for me.

Yay! Entry of a royal blood eh? Me lubbing it and waiting for the next part already.
And about PMing for this story, I will assure you i shall stalk😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Eee! *giggles*
Finally I got something to stalk in IF😆

I always liked stories which were original, which were your characters, where you have the freedom to do whatever you wish to do with them.

The grave silence of Professor gives a glimpse of the shadows of his past. And the letter though didn't give him ample excitement, it did the magic for me.

Yay! Entry of a royal blood eh? Me lubbing it and waiting for the next part already.
And about PMing for this story, I will assure you i shall stalk😆


Brat! 🤗 Thank you so much for your amazing comment!

Really? Why don't you try writing one then? As I said before, I don't read your stories because it gives me awkward images with Maneet, but if you write with original characters, I will definitely read it!

Ye like Royal Blood? Prince Charming, eh? 😆

Thank you so much Miss. Bratty! Love you for this amazing comment! 😳 🤗

And has ever been as happy as I am to have a stalker? 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LMAO! I wrote many stories without Maan Geet names just never posted them 😆

The one with name Run Away Bride I am writing in my blog is of original characters.

He he he better have lots of ego, your prince charming, you see me likes Darcy jaise log. No wonder am in lubb with Prithvi🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Maggie.

LMAO! I wrote many stories without Maan Geet names just never posted them 😆

The one with name Run Away Bride I am writing in my blog is of original characters.

He he he better have lots of ego, your prince charming, you see me likes Darcy jaise log. No wonder am in lubb with Prithvi🤣


Wait, Run Away Bride isn't a Maan Geet FF? 😲 Then I am definitely reading that one! 😆 And please, do post those stories for vela people like me! 😆

My lips are sealed on that, but I will try my best to keep him acceptable! 😆

Why thee talk of Prithvi? It sends me off into the dream-land of Shamli! Me, Prithvi and beautiful flowers under that tree near old temple!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohh Lala!!!

Prof DHiren Varma.. What a smexy name! ;)

I Hope there is lot of romance... lot of nail biting scenes and all this makes me hyper u knw that buhahahaha!


DO update whenever u get time ;) <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: IAmAaru

Ohh Lala!!!

Prof DHiren Varma.. What a smexy name! ;)

I Hope there is lot of romance... lot of nail biting scenes and all this makes me hyper u knw that buhahahaha!


DO update whenever u get time ;) <3


KAMINII 🤗 I had a feeling you would read this!

Ewww! Professor is an old man dude! With grey hair! You sure it's a "smexy" name?

Will update soon! Mwah! 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Destiny.


KAMINII 🤗 I had a feeling you would read this!

Ewww! Professor is an old man dude! With grey hair! You sure it's a "smexy" name?

Will update soon! Mwah! 🤗


Old man Ko Koi Bacha wach.. hoga.. and i Guess he has Royal connection.. The Name Varma Always is Like HYPER :P :D 😳

AND You Only HAd a feeling that i would read this?... You werent sure?😲

I WILL READ EVERYTHING THAT U WRITE! CAUSE YOU ARE MY ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting! Loved the mysterious feel to the writing, will wait to see how it transforms into a love story! Update soon😊

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