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Posted: 12 years ago
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There comes a day,
When u realise ur worth..
There comes a night..
Where u feel that dearth
Of some happiness,unknown to u..
U wait for serendipity to peek out with the morning dew..

u watch the misery in the world..
Feel lucky to be the safer one..
yet somewhere ,u crave for some
happiness ,unknown to u
U wait for serendipity to peek out with the morning dew...

Loving words are never enough..
Coz u know, they are less than love..
But no one knows they might be the last..
Somewhere down u still gasp
For that happiness , unknown to u..
U wait for serendipity to peek out with the morning dew..

A/N: Haven't been here in a long while .. umm so , i just wrote this thing having absolutely failing to come up with something.. Hope u guys like it.. !



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Words truer have never been spoken! Beautiful, Purple :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Dee-

Words truer have never been spoken! Beautiful, Purple :)


thats a huge compliment for me.. thanks a lot dee 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awe... its so true!!!!!... i felt as if my thoughts n feelings i gt sometimes wen i sit back to contemplate on my life is been portrayed here!!!!!!
so beautiful neha!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarah_kelly

awe... its so true!!!!!... i felt as if my thoughts n feelings i gt sometimes wen i sit back to contemplate on my life is been portrayed here!!!!!!

so beautiful neha!! 🤗


i was exactly in the same position wen i wrote it 😆

thanks a lot sarah.. those words mean a lot 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Purple_Lady


i was exactly in the same position wen i wrote it 😆

thanks a lot sarah.. those words mean a lot 🤗

🤗 i wanna read more of ua writings!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully penned!⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hunnybunch

Beautifully penned!⭐️



thank u very much hunny 😃

liked ur username !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was beautiful! Loved the way u penned down the feelings😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is beautiful poetry!

"You wait for serendipity to peek out with the morning dew" Beautiful lines! And so true to the basic characteristic of any human to hope. Hope for something better out there.
Hope to read more of your poetry!

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