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Beautiful chapter again. I don't think you are a mom yourself but you have managed to capture the essence of motherhood very well in the first para. So big thumbs up for the great job there. :)
The rest of the paras flow smoothly and convey the story well. Sibling rivalry happens everywhere and is sweet too at times but Roshni seemed to be angry at something else...wondering too what can be the reason for this behavior. She seemed happy in class with her little students, the whole classroom part was very cute!
One is hurt sometimes, because of the realisation and inability to accept that somewhere he or she is the cause of a greater hurt. The hurt he or she feels is not a result of someone else's hurtful words but the need to find solace and refuge in the falsehood of being hurt themselves.
^ Beautiful lines. Again highly relatable so brilliant job.
The last part about friend messaging again could relate to it. Often happens that a simple text by an almost forgotten friend makes you so happy and even if you are feeling a bit miffed at them for forgetting you the text makes you smile and forget everything. You described that moment very well.
Good job Dee and thanks for the pm. Continue the story soon! :))
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