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Posted: 13 years ago
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I wish I could see you
My eyes hurt, my heart aches
The days of our love have passed
Of gifts and chocolate cakes

I adored you with all my heart
I loved you with all my might
I pray to Him every day
For once, if I see your sight

I kneel, I weep, I plead
I cry, I fret, I beg in vain
For no one's around to see
My anxiety, my fury, my immense pain

I wish I could reverse my life
I wish you could be around
I miss your warmth, I miss your love
I miss your touch, and your sound


~ Roshan

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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is so moving.. thank u for letting me know u write 😊
I kneel, I weep, I plead
I cry, I fret, I beg in vain
For no one's around to see
My anxiety, my fury, my immense pain

👏.. i have no words dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Purple_Lady

this is so moving.. thank u for letting me know u write 😊

I kneel, I weep, I plead
I cry, I fret, I beg in vain
For no one's around to see
My anxiety, my fury, my immense pain

👏.. i have no words dear..



Thank you, lady. I have read your poems in here. You write really well. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This one is very very beautiful Roshan..Can I use this for an upcoming SS of mine?Will give you total credit:))
SomeOldUser thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SallyAmanda

This one is very very beautiful Roshan..Can I use this for an upcoming SS of mine?Will give you total credit:))



You're welcome, Sally. Yes, please, go ahead. Thoughts are meant to be shared. You're more than welcome to use it. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very touching poem 👏 i like itt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That's fantabulous. I simply adore the poem.Mind if I copy-paste it in one of my topic that is in love,friendship corner section?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: V.I.P

That's fantabulous. I simply adore the poem.Mind if I copy-paste it in one of my topic that is in love,friendship corner section?



Thank you. You're more than welcome to. 😊 I ain't gonna publish it, so you can have it. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Desi-IFer-



Thank you. You're more than welcome to. 😊 I ain't gonna publish it, so you can have it. 😃

Thank youu 😃 It's awesome and indeed deserves popularity 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: V.I.P

Thank youu 😃 It's awesome and indeed deserves popularity 😉



Awww!! That's awesome!! 😃 Do you also write?

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