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lavanya_armaan

@lavanya_armaan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

amazinggg...u are srslii a poet di...

great,,,

i lovedd it alot😃

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jannat4ever

@jannat4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Oh NO! m late..

resss

OMG!! Where were you since so long? 😲
Beautiful <3

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Hey Geee 🤗

You know I was so surprised to see a PM. And when I read the poem , i was like 'WOW'. It is intense, deep and touching. Realistic in every sense.

The title is so apt. I wonder if something else would better befit your poetry. This is like most suited and attention grabbing.

Each and every line was awesome. Like m sure, everyone would have found themselves connected while reading any or every line. Do I need to mention it was mature! The mood which you've used in your poetry is one of those that fascinates me.
There are actually 4-5 lines which i loved a lot but the last 4 took my heart away. They're beautiful <3 M in awe.

You surely should write more. Poetry or FF or both. I would love to read something more from you. Nice writing skill, you've. M surely gonna treasure this poem =)

Love ya
Vini

Edited by coolvini4u - 14 years ago

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mehak arora

@Mojo.

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

OMG! di...sucha a nice poem that was i loved it so much di that was really nice cute and a really very romantic poem...sooo nicee just loved it like anything i have never sucha gr8 poet like you ever in my life i just love your poems like anything...although it was you second one but still i just loved it to the core...the bestest, romantic most awesomest poem i have ever read in my life :D

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: jannat4ever
**reserved**
yipeee ...yipeee
yipeee ...yipeee
dhinchak ...dhinchak......i m the first one....wowhhh party time...🥳
laallallal lallalalla lallalalla ...😎...😍
now coming to the above master piece...

i m totally speechless yar...but still it was fabulous
imply unbelievable...
loved d way you flawlessly personified happiness and pain...jaana you wrote in a beautiful way...words meant a lot...it sounds like such a amazing story...
emotions felt so true n realistic...
believe me jaana i have never seen such a meaningful and amazingly written poem ever in my life....as i m not a poem lover but after reading this i fell in love with your poem...all emotions were clearly expressed that made me like OMG she wrote this...👏 hats off to you for this one and now dont you dare to underestimate yourself...i m gonna kill you if you did...now back to topic...

The whole concept of happiness and pain was just unbelievable...so well written...i just loved it...

He was PAIN, who shared my loneliness

And gave me the vigor of fight!!

He didn't hold my hand, (unlike happiness),

Instead entwined his finger with mine,

His best gift was not some gold or silver!

But drops of pearls in my sullen eyes

Happiness is just an occasional infatuation,

FEEL IT, let it go in vain!!!..

But life smiles and dances, only when

You fall in True love with PAIN!!!

above lines were truly outstanding...touched my heart...so Beautifully written love

keep up ur beautiful work mam...see you have done such a wonderful job...
thanx 4 d pm..(ur farz...hehehe..😉)
continue soon

take care
lots of love
your's sweetheart
jannat

wwooohhh what a celebration yaar..good going..😛...Awww just love you so much My sweetheart for such a lovely and heart touching comments🤗...you know na wt it means for me...I am glad that you like my work so much😳...your words alwaazz encourage me to do more...please alwazz with me...

Lots of Love
GEET
(ur jaana)

Edited by sweetdesire - 14 years ago

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: neha2607
wow...
beautifully written, i loved the way u expressed every word which were filled with emotions...

Hey dear
Thanks a lot for ur sweet comments😊
I am so glad that u like it

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Harneetluvesksg
beautifully written :D

harneet <3

Hey Harneet dear
Thanks a lot for liking my work...😊

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat
beautiful...
each n every word was filled wid emotions...
really touching...
thnx for the pm...

Hey dear
Thanks alot for ur sweet comment
I am glad you like it😊

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sejal719
WOW geet this so soo touching and awesome

i must say you have a talent for writing such beautiful poems :)

ur the best and the poem is so true... it also encouraging so keep up the good work and im waiting for the next one :D

Hey Sejal
I am glad you like my work😊
Aww you are so sweet
Thank you so much