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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey All...I am Geet and I am here again to Post one of my Creations😳...Thanks a lot for all ur support...hope you like this one also...😊


In True Love with...



Holding his (Happiness) hands, the days went by,

I chirped like a lil' bird

With hopes brimming, to fly high!

For with him,

Each morning promised life,

The day seemed more bright

Love-laden were my evenings,

And mirth rolled through the night!

But a sudden aghast!!!!!

A cold breeze blew

That tested our togetherness,

& found he was untrue'''''.

Yesss'he was not true

Happiness was a traitor!!!!!!

Who MOVED ON, with feathers trimmed?

Ahh! Why did I trust such a cheater?????

Was our togetherness unreal?

Or he "MY happiness";

This puzzle could never be solved

He vanished as if a mirage!

And colors from life's canvas dissolved''.

As I was forwarding,

Towards the darkness of dejection,

I felt someone clinching me tight,

He was PAIN, who shared my loneliness

And gave me the vigor of fight!!

He didn't hold my hand, (unlike happiness),

Instead entwined his finger with mine,

& said ' "I shan't leave you easily honey",

Shuddering me,

Imbibed his presence, divine!!

Divine, as it was he (Pain),

Who helped me connect with the supreme

PAIN discovered the warrior in me,

And made me REALIZE MY DREAM!!

His best gift was not some gold or silver!

But drops of pearls in my sullen eyes

That taught me play fair, by washing my inner self;

Re-defining, 'lost me', amidst those cries

Pain made me realize...

Happiness is just an occasional infatuation,

FEEL IT, let it go in vain!!!..

But life smiles and dances, only when

You fall in True love with PAIN!!!


So this is it guys...Hope you all like it...Do hit the like tab and Plzz comments...It means a lot to me...😳


Lots of Love

GEET



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jannat4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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**reserved**
yipeee ...
yipeee
yipeee ...yipeee
dhinchak ...dhinchak......i m the first one....wowhhh party time...🥳
laallallal lallalalla lallalalla ...😎...😍
now coming to the above master piece
...

i m totally speechless yar...but still it was fabulous
imply unbelievable...
loved d way you flawlessly personified happiness and pain...jaana you wrote in a beautiful way...words meant a lot...it sounds like such a amazing story...
emotions felt so true n realistic...
believe me jaana i have never seen such a meaningful and amazingly written poem ever in my life....as i m not a poem lover but after reading this i fell in love with your poem...all emotions were clearly expressed that made me like OMG she wrote this...👏 👏 👏 👏 hats off to you for this one and now dont you dare to underestimate yourself...i m gonna kill you if you did...now back to topic...

The whole concept of happiness and pain was just unbelievable...so well written...i just loved it...


He was PAIN, who shared my loneliness

And gave me the vigor of fight!!


He didn't hold my hand, (unlike happiness),

Instead entwined his finger with mine,


His best gift was not some gold or silver!

But drops of pearls in my sullen eyes


Happiness is just an occasional infatuation,

FEEL IT, let it go in vain!!!..

But life smiles and dances, only when

You fall in True love with PAIN!!!


above lines were truly outstanding...touched my heart...so Beautifully written love
keep up ur beautiful work mam...see you have done such a wonderful job...
thanx 4 d pm..(ur farz...hehehe..😉)
continue soon


take care
lots of love
your's sweetheart
jannat



Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...
beautifully written, i loved the way u expressed every word which were filled with emotions...
anumeha_rajat thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful...

each n every word was filled wid emotions...

really touching...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW geet this so soo touching and awesome


i must say you have a talent for writing such beautiful poems :)

ur the best and the poem is so true... it also encouraging so keep up the good work and im waiting for the next one :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet...my love... it was splendid!!!!! you wrote beautifully dear...i could feel the emotion...i loved the way...u wrote in such a simple way...but the words meant a lot...i was almost in tears... for some reason i was imagining Armaan and riddhima untill the cheating part and then my mind just went blank... i couldnot imagine Armaan and riddhima anymore...
Cause Armaan would never cause any pain for his basket...
keep up ur beautiful work...
luv yahh sweetie xx
Meghana xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey shona
speeclesss dear
after reading In True Love with...it was awesome dear⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...
all emtion feel really so true n realistic...
i m love this poem dear so somuch...i goosebmps after reading this...

i can't explaain what i feel u know na i m not good explaining my feeling...
just want to say
clapping with standing position...hats off dear⭐️👏⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏...loved it so much & love u too to write poem...
thanks for wring such a beautiful poem..now i m waitng so many poems, ff & Os from uuu...i want more samjhi
love u shona
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome awesome awesome
tooo ksgoood
just loved how u beautifully personified happiness n pain
u r an amazing poet n friend
so plzzz do write more
lots of lov
vaani😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW! Meri sweetu Pyari Geet!
This was simply unbelievable. Never seen such meaningful and beautifully written poem ever in my short life. Simply breath-taking. The whole story and the contrast between Happiness and pain was just simply, amazing, beautifully and unbelievably well written! Geet, seriously you have suprised me with your wiritng! Its just breath-taking.
I Love the whole story. It was a simple story, Happiness breezed past her life but cast a shadow of pain in her, for seemingly forever. Loved it! Truly Loved it! I loved the interlock of her lovestory in the form of happiness and pain. I L.O.V.E.D. I.T!

"His best gift was not some gold or silver!

But drops of pearls in my sullen eyes"

These two lines among others truly touched my heart and made me gasp. Beautifully written. Bring them on! Keep the poems coming, please!?
Love Priyanka <3 ;)
Edited by ..KaJenDelena.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey geet
u r really an ausum poet yaar
i really loved the poem
d emotions were clearly expressed
do write more
nd thx fr d pm

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