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Posted: 14 years ago
@Sajan_Ekta-it was such a touching os....really it was very nice!!my vote goes for u!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Nishi :
Beautiful OS👏..it really made me cry😭..my vote goes for u👏👍🏼🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

My place in your heart

It is another day at college and Maria has just started college, she's not just come to study but she's here to reach her destination. A place in her heart for someone she loved.

She walks up the stairs and sees a boy who looks at her and when both eyes meet it seems as if they have seen each other for many years. Their eyes interlock with each other, her blue eyes meets his grey eyes and both could sense something deep inside.

"Kyle, what's up dude?" shouts an unexpected guy walking towards Kyle and at this point Maria and Kyle's inter session stops and she slowly walks away and starts walking towards her class. Kyle keeps looking at her when she goes but then she stops and turns around and smiles at Kyle. Kyle has a big grin on his face; his friend asks him "Who is she?"

Kyle says "I have no idea but I feel as if I know her". His friend has a confused face and while he laughs he says "Come on mate we should go to class". "Lucky, you go to class. I will come in a minute or two".

Kyle is walking to his class when he sees Maria in her chemistry class; he stops and looks at her. He notices her writing notes and strands of her hair fall out and with her fair hands she puts the strands back and Kyle keeps looking at her with passion. Maria looks up at the teacher and then she notices Kyle looking at her and again both of their eyes meet each other.

They both keep looking at each other when "Maria, why are you looking outside?" Maria looks away from Kyle and looks at Mrs Button who seems to be a strict teacher, "Sorry Miss, there is a boy outside the class" but when Mrs Button looks no one is there. Maria looks surprised and Mrs Button says "Maria please get out of the class NOW".

Maria sits outside on the bench and then Kyle appears in front of her "I am sorry I didn't mean for Mrs Button to shout at you", Maria looks up and she says "It's ok, why were you looking at me?" Kyle started smiling and he said "I don't know I feel as if I have known you for a long time, are you from somewhere else?" Maria said "I am, I came from Goa and I am searching for a close friend of mine" and Kyle looked confused and he was thinking "You are not Heaven Street are you?" Maria surprisingly said "Yes I am why? Do you know someone who lives on that street?"

Kyle started smiling even more and he looked at Maria and he went close to her and said "The love you give me comes with much pride as much as my heart is feeling inside I love that we'll always stay strong and true no one in this world will ever love me like you do". Maria started to laugh and cry and she gave a massive hug to Kyle and she said "Kyle, I can't believe it. I always felt I knew you but I never felt as if we would see each other again, I missed you so much" Kyle smiled and said "I missed you too Maria and I want to say that my heart always belonged to you"

Maria and Kyle broke the hug and they both put their heads together and kept looking at each other and the love between them was amazing and beautiful, they both held hands and started walking towards the sunset reminiscing their childhood memories.

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Posted: 14 years ago
pariiiiiiiiiiii...i have tears in my eyes!!! literally...its such a numbing story for me!
such a beauitful message...we worship love!
bcz love is the only emotion in the world dat harbours all others..love is the only emotion that has the power to turn a person!..
loved it pari..love u..:D:D..
hope u win dis!
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Posted: 14 years ago
@nishu......wow........my vote 2 u dear.................i thought of participitatin par no..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
nish!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nish nish nishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i adore u.....ilove d way u have d gift of putting your thoughts on paper...i absolutely loved it!
uv pondered so deeply on some unanswered tumultous emotions dat know no boundaries!!!!..... love u loadz!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww thank you so much Debo! Love you loads 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Nishi-omg it was such a beautiful os...very emotional one....my vote goes for u!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nishi - A VERY nice OS. 😳 It was so emotional, shows how talented you are. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
nishi awesome.
superb.
fab..
loved ur SS to the core........
thanx for the pm....

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