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Hey guys. This is my first time at Writers Corner posting, or planning on posting, a story of mine. This bit is just an intro to my story. I hope you like it. If I get a few comments, then I will plan on writing my story.
Intro
Abhinav Shukla
He comes form a low-middle class family. However, through his own hard-work and effort, he manages to live through life. At the mire age of six, he was orphaned due to a drunk driver hitting the auto his parents were in. In childhood, he lived off the streets up until the age of ten. Then Mrs. Khurana, a middle aged professor, took him under her arms and gave him everything that a child deserves from his mother. She sheltered him, feed him, educated him, and gave him her own name, Aman Khurana.
Aman grows up to be an intelligent student who get accepted into Brown University where her Badi Maa, Mrs.Khurana, is a professor.
He is currently entering his second year of college at Brown Uni where almost every girl drools over his tightly packed muscles and his handsome features. But never had Aman given these girl much attention. It wasn't as if he was against dating or going out with a girl. But he just didn't have time. And more importantly, no girl attracted him. He thought that no girl will ever catch his attention...up until he met a certain someone who changed his heart forever!
She comes from a high profile family background, which owns the Shah Textiles all around the world. Being the only daughter of Milind and Reena Shah, she was raised with a golden spoon in her mouth. But not once did she take advantage of her status in society. She may be the only child of a wealthy business tycoon, but she had taken after her father, who valued human affection more then wealth. She was a creation that many people had difficulty recognizing which is why her father had named her Rachna...
Rachna Shah can stand everything. But one thing she can't stand is disrespect. She is a beautiful girl which is why guys always want to make her their own. But they don't know one very important thing, Rachna isn't looking for the "perfect guy" for herself. She is looking for an honest man, a man that respects her, an man that understands her, a man that trusts her, a man that protects her, and most importantly...a man that truly loves her for who she is. A though combination to find in one guy....up until she meets a certain someone who not only inhibits all of the "required" qualities, but also abides by it.
That's the intro for now. Leave all your comments and let me know if you want me to continue!!!
~Kali~
Part One: Pg 2
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh yay!!! ek aur kahani!!! lovingg itt!!!!!! mujhe bhi pm bhejna....pleasee!!
and i know you're very angry wit h me, and i have a lot of explaining to do!!! and trust me i will....its just....summer was all over the place, school started and things haven't calmed down sincee!!!!! i hope ur doing well, and super good in school too!!! and how's ur mom and bhaiya doing?? btw....happy navratri to you di! i don't celebrate it, but i'm sure my kali di knows how to play some dandiya......you have to teach me!!!! it's like my all time favourite thing to learn....i mean i can play if i practice! but i love it when people can just play freestyle dandiya at festivals and melas!
abhi tou its night time, so i gotta hit the bed for school 2moro! tons of tests this week...so i'm exhaustedd....and i'm sure school's pretty insane for you too!! so all the very best, i'll catch up with you soon i promise!! but pleasee keep me posted, and pleasee update rape child....i'm eagerly waiting to see how that story is gonna proceed!!!
loveeee youu tonzzz!! missing you tonzz moree!!!!!!
your Samra Jiiiiiii :D <3333333333333 🤗
P.S. so mom recently ate idli sambhar at some party, and she couldn't stop ravng about it! lol...i, on the other hand, couldn't stop thinking about you the whole timee!!!!! i told her how i have this perfect recipe from my kali di from I-F, and she's planning to try it this winter break ;D
**edited**
P.P.S. who is this rachna girl?? i mean, who's the actress?? LOL! honestly speaking, i was staring at her face for the longest time thinking that it might be you! 😆😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow, moving onto writer's corner now?

I'm guessing no characters from other shows...pure writing?

Sound nice.

By the way with this new writing in place what about the other stuff? You updating any of your other FFs/SSs? *Pleads profusely* when are we going to update? 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u dont talk to me kalii u just start stories and never end them nor updt themm and even u leave some halfwayyy veryyy badd m very upsettttt with uuuuuuu

huh so this time something different form premeer
i mostly read their ffs but okk this time will look forward toooo ur storyy with this charactersss hope to gettt a short prologue and a chapter soon

regards aishu

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Posted: 14 years ago
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looking forward for this one
but when are u updating ur ffs and ss
missing u updating those
plz update them soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: masin

oh yay!!! ek aur kahani!!! lovingg itt!!!!!! mujhe bhi pm bhejna....pleasee!! Kaun ho tum? Zara mujhe yaad toh dilana.....😡

Samra ki Bacchi.....ab yaad ayi mai. You only remember me when I post something new and then, puff! You're gone! This is not done yaar!......
Okay i'm not mad anymore. How are you sugary sweet pie? I miss posting my updates so much but I have so much to do and soooooooooooooooooo little time.😭
and i know you're very angry wit h me That I Am😡, and i have a lot of explaining to do!Uhuh🥱!! and trust me i will..Kab?..its just....summer was all over the place, school started and things haven't calmed down sincee Yeah tel me about it! My summer was same. 😆!!!!! i hope ur doing well, and super good in school too TOO much WORK yaar!!!!😕!!! and how's ur mom and bhaiya doing Mom is doing great and bhaiya, as usual being very nice to me but never helping me on my hw.😆?? btw....happy navratri to you di! i don't celebrate it, but i'm sure my kali di knows how to play some dandiya...I went three days and have like a bazilion blisters on my feet!!! 😭😭😭 But it was so much fun!👏👏...you have to teach me Mere chag aaja! !!!! it's like my all time favourite thing to learn....i mean i can play if i practice! but i love it when people can just play freestyle dandiya at festivals and melas! It's very simple. Try looking it up on Utube.
abhi tou its night time, so i gotta hit the bed for school 2moro! tons of tests this week...so i'm exhaustedd...Tell me about it!!! 🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱.and i'm sure school's pretty insane for you too!! so all the very best, i'll catch up with you soon i promise!! but pleasee keep me posted, and pleasee update rape child. I don't know when to post it. Never have time to finish the next part....i'm eagerly waiting to see how that story is gonna proceed!!! December break is my and my comp FOREVA....will try to post b/f then though.
loveeee youu tonzzz!! missing you tonzz moree!!!!!!
your Samra Jiiiiiii :D <3333333333333 🤗
P.S. so mom recently ate idli sambhar at some party, and she couldn't stop ravng about it! lol...i, on the other hand, couldn't stop thinking about you the whole timee!!!!! i told her how i have this perfect recipe from my kali di from I-F, and she's planning to try it this winter break ;D That's funny. but you should really try them.......😆😆😆😆
**edited**
P.P.S. who is this rachna girl?? i mean, who's the actress She's like a classical dancer but my mom said she looks EXACTLY like me....😲😲?? LOL! honestly speaking, i was staring at her face for the longest time thinking that it might be you! 😆😳 That's what my mom said.....her eyes, nose, lips almost everything is like me....which is why I chose her.😲😲 But she is a lot pretttier then me....funny that you mntion it.
Anyways, good night. Do good in school. And call me when you make that idli-sambhar for dinner!!!!! LOVE THEM!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: iheartChai

Wow, moving onto writer's corner now? Hey Grace...They're just good looking people I looked up...the girl is a clasical dancer!

I'm guessing no characters from other shows...pure writing? Yep! Hopefully it's good.

Sound nice. Thank you. And especially for you, this one's gonna bit almost all in english.

By the way with this new writing in place what about the other stuff? You updating any of your other FFs/SSs? *Pleads profusely* when are we going to update? 😛 I'm trying real hard but not satisfied with what I have written so far...will try to update soon though!

p.s. I own you a comment for you short story. Just read it and I was like jumping up and down when I found out Heer was gonna have a Prem's baby...that's so cute. I just can't wait to read more into it!!!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

u dont talk to me kalii u just start stories and never end them nor updt themm and even u leave some halfwayyy veryyy badd m very upsettttt with uuuuuuu

I'm sorry Aishu but there is so much for me to do at school. I have so many ideas but never have the correct amoutn of time to write it all out. And when I have the time, I sorta lose track on what I have to get done.😆

huh so this time something different form premeer
i mostly read their ffs but okk this time will look forward toooo ur storyy with this charactersss hope to gettt a short prologue and a chapter soon
That's so sweet of u. Hopefully I won't disappoint you with this one.

regards aishu

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part One
It had been fairly simple for Rachna to adjust into her new dorm room as now it was the beginning of her freshmen year at Xavier Creek University. Her room was comfortable; she had a comfy bed, a nice work area with all the essential office supplies (including a huge desk), a small refrigerator, and a spacious closet. There was nothing much that she dislike about the place. Except…her skimpy, little roommate.

Kajal Rana was not the roommate that she expected to be around. But Rachna still considered her as a friend because Kajal was not ill- at heart. She was just a little too much into her tini tiny clothes and hanging around perverts that used her left and right.

But Kajal had been around her since middle school and a sort of understanding bond had built between them. Rachna knew that Kajal was jealous of her because she was "as rich" as she was. But couldn't she see that Rachna never valued money more than companionship and friendship? Obviously not!

::

It was the first day of college and as usual, Rachna woke up early, took a nice warm shower, and dressed herself in casual blue jeans and a navy blue GAP t-shirt. Her long, silky hair was tied back in a high pony tail while her bangs seemed to escape and caress her soft cheeks. As she stood in the mirror, highlighting her eyes with kohl, she eyes Kajal who was busy zipping up a short red dress.

"Hey Rach! Help me with this yaar…" Kajal said as she tried harder to zip up the dress. The bond between them wasn't the strongest in the world, but Kajal knew that she could always count on Rachna. All she had to do was "act" as if she was her friend, while behind her back, Kajal can laugh over her nave personality.

Rachna did as she was told and helped her, a smile always greeting her. Rachna wasn't stupid. She knew what Kajal thought of her. But a matter of fact, it didn't bother her. Kajal could think whatever she ever wanted, but Rachna thought of her as a friend who was alone in this world and needed someone by her side.

::

Being the richest person in the entire city always bother her because it got her extra attention. Which is why when Rachna entered her first period class, she saw the study looking guys eyes her as if she was their prey. She knew she had the looks, the figure, and the money. But she most importantly harbored an intelligent brain which wasn't going to fall for such trappers. No way Jose!

Ignoring the hungry gazes that fell upon her, she chose to sit in the back of the class so as to not catch their attention. That would help her from being uncomfortable under their gaze.

After she seated herself in the seat, she noticed a tall, muscular guy enter the class room. And for the first time in her life, she found herself, catching her breath. It wasn't the physical built of muscles on his torso that got her drooling nor was it the slight stubble that made girls want to caress it. It was his eyes that caught her attention. They were so expressive yet so subtle, so passionate yet so calm, and as light as a flick yet so mysterious.

For the first time in her life, she found herself looking into the eyes that she dreamt of day and night. They were the eyes of the person who could love someone with all their heart and be ready to sacrifice their love if h had to for the girl's happiness. He was that the type that respected girls and never miss behaved. His sparkling eyes clearly display his intelligence. And the determination that was seeped deep inside those coffee warm eyes made her gulp down a lump in her throat. What was happening to her? Who was he? And why was she feeling this way?

Can't wait to read all your comments!!!! Sorry for grammer mistakes.
~Kali~
p.s. Samra and Grace ! I demand a comment!!!!!😆 a.k.a A comment would very much be appreciated.😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kajol......seriously these kind of ppl are to be avoided
Rachana is to good to be bad
she knws wht kajol thinks of her, but she still considers her as a frnd.......
rachana finally saw him..........
loved the way u discribed him...........

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