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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow, this was really, really beautiful! And very, very believable! I was smiling throughout! :) Very well written! 👏

Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

I AM SHOCKED!!!! SPEECHLESS...you could NEVER be so nice to write something for moi...and the rest of the people :/. Thanks. Keep the love coming. ;)

Anyhoo...the story was cute. The sister was so cruel though! haha! I liked it! I would've been like "I don't need your help...go away" I have done that before too lmao! But the little girl isn't as smart as I am. *smug muh. No one is as smart as you. :) Thanks!

Loved the ending..it confused me :P Is the little girl only allowed to stay till Saturday? haha! So stupid :) It was the lil girl that said she's only going to stay till Saturday, because she is stubborn and didn't want to admit that she didn't wanna leave. Get it?



Originally posted by: Anhdara13

that is so adorable Shabzie! (:



tyty. :) thanks for reading as well!

Originally posted by: nisha.munim

Wow, this was really, really beautiful! And very, very believable! I was smiling throughout! :) Very well written! 👏



thanks for reading & commenting! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Whoa, Shabzie! Whatever happened to the Queen of Tragedy? Well, whatever happened, I think this one was so positively adorable :D
Posted: 15 years ago
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LMAO. Never got a chance. :(

TAANK OO! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was such an adorable shot
Celina was surely a bundle and her di really knows how to get onto her
wonderful one
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aww ty! :) For reading&commenting.

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