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Hi my names Mehvish and i absolutly love reading books and thought of writting. Ive started writting a book. Please tell me if I should carry on or stop because its kinda boring. Improvement are welcome.

Mr Smith stood in front of us and began his speech "I just want to say a few words to express the company's appreciation for the time Sarah has spent with us. Sarah's moving on to bigger and brighter things which will leave a gaping hole in the organisation. While she has put in place some amazing ideas that will stay after she leaves, it will be a challenge to fill that hole. So Sarah, I hope you have all the best prosperity and fulfilment in your future endeavours. There is no doubt you'll make a success of future opportunities as you have here. These words and gift are just a small expression of our appreciation for your work and time here. So farewell and good luck." I looked at Sarah in shock was she actually leaving me forever, I knew it was destined to happen but so soon. All her memories fluttered in my head. I remembered the first day we met. It was heavily raining that day, I saw a girl she wore a simple, light pink anarkali dress. She seemed to be preoccupied and suddenly a truck was coming towards her but she wasn't moving. I grabbed on to her arm, and flung her angrily in to my arms. Her light brown eyes where full of tears, everything made sense now. At the time I was thinking how stupid could she get trying to kill herself in traffic why couldn't she use some sense and use poison.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey its nice.. kep writing. m curious to know what happens next..

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