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Antares

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Nice one! Quite a tragic one........that Mr. Perfect raped her......and that's the reason they had to get married......obviously his wife would hate him......ugh......am hating him.....though its just a fiction......but you have portrayed it all so well......their feelings and all........and now that creep is feeling guilty for his actions........is he in love with her....or just being sympathetic.....whatever.....all in all a great short story...it was so poignant!

Edited by Starry_night - 15 years ago

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sumaiya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: aish_punk
hey sumi di..sweet story..

that guy seems just so perfect!..people of all age like him :P..but too bad he's married!..n they don't exactly have a strong bond..is his wife crazy?..the other girls are swooning over him!..

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

-aish

thanks for reading it aish! lol you'll see what's wrong with his wife in the next part :P

Originally posted by: Starry_night
That was really good! A so-called perfect guy.......whose wife doesn't want to stay with him....as of now that's all I understood.....lolz.......now continue soon!😃

And woman, update your ff if you are not studying.....don't make me whack you.....or go and write some one-shots on YuNa!😛😆😆

lol i'll update those too don't worry :P....thanks!!

Originally posted by: flamingo_aries
lol....sumi update this soon............varna me whacking u wid ur own lamps.....y u always end up in mystery..??? btw gud chapter....wanna more...

thanks maitz!! lol cus I love mysteries :P

Originally posted by: Sofna
Continue....cntinue.....👍🏼

N do rmmbr to cont the previous ones aswell 😆

lol I remember the previous ones don't worry :P

Originally posted by: Girl_2007
haha u portrayed nicely this guy's perfection =) but if he's sooo perfect, why does his wife hate him? for loving him?.. lol, or maybe some past thing that happened between em before, who knows... ^^ (r u gonna tell us soon btw?)
and... ah, the waitresses scene sounds to me sooo familiar XP but anyhow there's always some small ruckus related to waitresses while talking about hot men... XP i guess the poor girls r just too bored of their "monotonous" work, so any little thing makes it more exciting

lol I think all the waitresses are the same...it's cliche I guess! thanks! lol you'll find out why she hates him :P

Originally posted by: Drishti...
hey it was rlly nice.!...the guy is considered to be perfect but his wife doesnt even want to stay with him...lol y is tat?...curiously waiting for the next part...do update soon
drishti :)

lol well nothing is perfect right :P thanks for reading it!

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Drishti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

oh god.!! it was soooo nice...sooooo emotional..i felt like crying for shona...so the reason she was angry with him was tat he raped her and then was forced into a marriage with him..tats sooo sad...

the update is rlly good...u potrayed the emotions soo well

thnku sooo much...and for the pm also :)

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Drishti

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Drishti...
hey it was rlly nice.!...the guy is considered to be perfect but his wife doesnt even want to stay with him...lol y is tat?...curiously waiting for the next part...do update soon
drishti :)

lol well nothing is perfect right :P thanks for reading it!

yaa ure right 😊

ure most welcome...but it was worth it so need to say thnks 😊 😊

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Anjana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Loved it sumiii👏...cont soon😛

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ilive2laugh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

hmm not your usual style of writing but still nice

guessing you got inspired from geet?

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sumaiya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

lol snehu he did not rape her in geet...so no I didn't get inspired by that :P...I was just bored yesterday of studying so I started daydreaming :P

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Sofna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Sumi wen i read 'last part' i was 😲......

It is such a tragic,😭 rivetting,😔 n beautifully written by u🤗

I absolutely loved it!!!.....i knw you've ended it but u can cont..it too...😆

In 2 parts u have conveyed soooooo much!!!👍🏼

Ur talent leave sme in awe somtimes!!!👏👏

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

hey sumi di..nice part..

Amir was perfect but its just that he didn't think of himself that way..when rahul called him that he got really angry..but rahul went on teasing him..n he snarled the truth at him..

so he had raped her?..thats really sad..but i wonder why he did that..but anyway, its justified shona wouldn't be happy with him..

thnx 4 d pm

-aish