Perfect - Short Story - pg.2 last part

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Safina

@miss_choxz

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

amir :P

lovely "STORY" cant wait for more........im sure this ff is going to superb...........and i like the fact that it is real.........no filmy or serial characters.........do continue.....well d'uh obviously u will :P

i think i should start writing one too :p

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

lol safina...it was just two parts...lol there is nothing more to write :P

and lol shush...I like that name *sumi looks away :P*

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Sofna

@Sofna

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: -bhootni-
lol safina...it was just two parts...lol there is nothing more to write :P

and lol shush...I like that name *sumi looks away :P*

U can't u have to continue😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡..YR MIND WILL CM UP WITH SMFIN🤣

CONTINUE!! CONTINUE!!! CONTINUE!!!! 😆😆😆😆

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -bhootni-
lol snehu he did not rape her in geet...so no I didn't get inspired by that :P...I was just bored yesterday of studying so I started daydreaming :P

lol no but he is so called "prefect" guy...for now and then he will dump her

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

i don't think he is a perfect guy...anyways lol no I wasn't thinking about him...Safina knows who Amir is...so I was thinking about him :P

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -bhootni-
i don't think he is a perfect guy...anyways lol no I wasn't thinking about him...Safina knows who Amir is...so I was thinking about him :P

damn it she knows and i dont😡

tell me who this loser is😆

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

@sofna...lol this story ain't getting any further :P....

@snehu...lol well he doesn't exist....it's too complicated...lol i'll tell you when we meet or something :P

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Archana

@Girl_2007

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

ohh....! so this is the last part, the one on pg. 2?? o_o a whole life and an undefined period of time that both th wife and th husband hav to bear.. forcefully?

well, nice! =) that's just realistic, a happy end or a tiny ray of hope isnt compulsory i guess.

and, so.. they married for that... thing that he did, i see.. that's just... not only hard for her, but for him too... im glad that at last he's a nice person, he doesnt usually bhave like he did. and, well, this man, its not so hateful for me, he's just living his punishment, na. Of course she is the one who really gotta be suffering to the core... i guess, time will heal things as much as possible.. 🥱