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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: BabyLove96

Hiiiiiiiiiiiii 😃 thanks for stopping by my craziiiieeeeee topiiic 😕 😆
aww thanks, but i'm no where as good as you 😳
😲 are you accusing me of making you hate Ozzy the fat vache?
Ohh what is a vache? can i use it sometimes? 😳😆
i know man i felt bad too
thank you ... i don't think i can continue the story cuz of my exams 😭 plz update ur story tooo !!!!!

haha.. no problem yaar😃 aww... thats so sweet😳 i am leanring a lot from u actually. as far as learning how to create suspense😆😆😆 u r so good at that. yeah we hate him hes so grosse ewooo ewooo😲🤣 vache meanse cow in french 🤣 sure u can use.
aww.. 😭 i hope you can cont soon though after your exams. how long are they?
awwww thanks i think i will today😳
btw, werent you thinking of ending this story? or was that someone else..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: *Nishi*

haha.. no problem yaar😃 aww... thats so sweet😳 i am leanring a lot from u actually. as far as learning how to create suspense😆😆😆 u r so good at that. yeah we hate him hes so grosse ewooo ewooo😲🤣 vache meanse cow in french 🤣 sure u can use.
aww.. 😭 i hope you can cont soon though after your exams. how long are they?
awwww thanks i think i will today😳
btw, werent you thinking of ending this story? or was that someone else..

im learning french ere in UK whoa vache means COW? 😛 cool im gonna use it 😳
thanks, i like the way your story i mean chapter starts and how you put details into the characters feelings 😃
yay yay yay waiit i need 2 reserve a comment 4 ur story b4 archana 😉
im not sure i have 2 french exams, 1 bio, 1 maths and an english exam some are done but the thing is im not sure if i wanna continue the stry
lets call Ozzy vache mer lol hope u no wat mer means 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: BabyLove96

im learning french ere in UK whoa vache means COW? 😛 cool im gonna use it 😳
thanks, i like the way your story i mean chapter starts and how you put details into the characters feelings 😃
yay yay yay waiit i need 2 reserve a comment 4 ur story b4 archana 😉
im not sure i have 2 french exams, 1 bio, 1 maths and an english exam some are done but the thing is im not sure if i wanna continue the stry
lets call Ozzy vache mer lol hope u no wat mer means 😆

haha.. yeah use it its fun to call things vache🤣 aww.. 😳 its hard to tell since no one really comments on it😆 well... now u n archu😳 hahahahahahaa🤣 achaaaa🤣
woooow..thats a lot well you can alway cont it when you're back. but then sometimes it hard to get back in the mood u know.. that happened to me with IKJ😆 im still trying to get back into the story. omggg.. doesnt that mean sea😆 ozzy vache mer😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: *Nishi*

haha.. yeah use it its fun to call things vache🤣 aww.. 😳 its hard to tell since no one really comments on it😆 well... now u n archu😳 hahahahahahaa🤣 achaaaa🤣
woooow..thats a lot well you can alway cont it when you're back. but then sometimes it hard to get back in the mood u know.. that happened to me with IKJ😆 im still trying to get back into the story. omggg.. doesnt that mean sea😆 ozzy vache mer😆😆😆

Noo mer means sh*t lol
Ozzy Vache Mer 😆
yeh i guess soo ... i miite go ahd wiv story or kill my skwl teachers 😃 hey thats a great plan to kill my teachers 😉😆
hav u red or watched twilight? i love it ... lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: BabyLove96

Noo mer means sh*t lol
Ozzy Vache Mer 😆
yeh i guess soo ... i miite go ahd wiv story or kill my skwl teachers 😃 hey thats a great plan to kill my teachers 😉😆
hav u red or watched twilight? i love it ... lol

OMG🤣 selina......🤣 thats hilarious.. omg🤣 hahahahahaha
haila kil ur teachs😲 🤣 yeah ive read almost 4 books.. 😆 i like it too a lot.. but its not my fave book😉
btw yaar update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Nishi*

OMG🤣 selina......🤣 thats hilarious.. omg🤣 hahahahahaha
haila kil ur teachs😲 🤣 yeah ive read almost 4 books.. 😆 i like it too a lot.. but its not my fave book😉
btw yaar update

What?! It's jusz a simpl fact ii was fiinkiin on doiin iit buhh 4gett iit now 😡 😡 😆 😆
haha my exams are over, i'll just need 2 get out of my skwl clothes and update 😉
wat does yaar mean? 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: BabyLove96

What?! It's jusz a simpl fact ii was fiinkiin on doiin iit buhh 4gett iit now 😡 😡 😆 😆
haha my exams are over, i'll just need 2 get out of my skwl clothes and update 😉
wat does yaar mean? 😆

u are done with ALL your exams?😲😆 goos yaar
yaar... yaar means pal/frind😡 how can u not know this. tum indian ho na??😡🤣🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Nishi*

u are done with ALL your exams?😲😆 goos yaar
yaar... yaar means pal/frind😡 how can u not know this. tum indian ho na??😡🤣🤣

Yeshhh iii amm donee wattsz wiiv dee shock? 😲 😆
goos yaar??? 😕 😆
ohh owkaii yaar means friend, sorry didnt know that
huh? no sorry im not indian 😳 😆 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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... A Twisted Summer Love Story ...

Hoii Hoii ... 😳

Sorry for the delay, i'm going to torture nisho longer 😉

Anyways, I want to add more people into the story; this is still going to be about Eshaye, only her new friends are going to change her liife. 🥱 😕 😆

Don't worry peepz, i'm not going to confuse you all 😃

New Characters:

James: Sweet, sensitive guy. 16 years old, with a 8 PACK! 😲 lol. He just moved into Arizona, trying a way to find Eshaye. (he's kindahh gott a fiing for her 😳) aww shooo sweet. A+ Student including his eight pack hes like a girl magnet and a basketball player.

Nishi: Haha, this is nishi from india-forums.com haha. lol 😆. i wonder how the story is going to get with her arrival. she is a drama queen. Sweet gal. Really funny, loves her violin. wont even let her mum and dad tuch it 😡 (sorry nisho i didn't mean to upset you, if u dun like ur character i can always edit my story out 😃 )

Sonny: no guyz, dis is a girl 😆. Sonny Munroe. Yep ( got the name from sonny with a chancen 😳😆) LMAO! anyways shes a comedian, very annoying and is Reginas faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar away cousin. she's nothing like regina. she's calm at times 😕 a little weird 🥱 and stalks James 😆

Jacob Wolfe (ooft love him, he's from twilight): Sorry i cant take all the names from stories so i changed it to Jacob Wolfe it's really in twilight called Jacob Black. I cant copy all names 😡. anyways his nickname is Jay (since i love that name ahahahaha). he's got a big body 😲 is the fastest runner in the whole of Eshaye's school 👏 🤢 loves flirting with eshaye. Is in Matt's crew. He is the second most wanted guy ( in a girl way if u no wahh i mean).

Archana: Archana is 14 years old. Yehh cool she skipped some grades cuz shes really braint duhh 😆 anyways, shes from SPAIN!!!! 😲 shes indian too ... awsome 😃 lovable, funny very inspirational towards others friends with nisho and eshaye 😉 ILY AND NISHO

Thats All 😃

Thanks, for reading and watching ??? 😕 😆

Nisho is going to be very interesting 🥱 Sweet dream'Sz guyz cuz i am tired.

Love Always,

Lil Laa-Laa Aka Seliina 😳

p.s: UPDATE COMING TOMORROW!

Edited by SeliinaBaybee12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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... A Twisted Summer Love Story ...

I changed into the beautiful silver dress Matt gave me on our first date. I straightened my hair; I just got it cut a few days ago upto my shoulders with a side fringe. My moussy brown hair was the thing Matt loved about me. Weird right?

Anyways, I wore silver bangles and silver and black sandals.

I sat on the sofa applying my make-up and Matt knocked on the door so loud I jumped and smudged my eye liner.

"MATT! Look what you made me do!" I cried.

He was confused and bursted out laughing.

"I love the gothic look Esh. But seriously i liked it better when you looked like a girl."

I bit my lip, trying to stop myself from slapping him. I turned around, sitting back on the sofa. He got the message that i was angry with him.

"Sorry!? C'mon everyone makes mistakes, don't they?" He asked; holding his ears and sticking his tongue out.

"Fine." Stil avoiding him.

"Shall I do your make-up for you?" He asked.

I didn't answer him, but he continued clearing away all the smudges and applying light silver eye-shadow, red blooded lipstick and eye-liner. He kissed my cheek.

"I'm sorry Matt." I said, hugging him.

He stood up pulling me along with him. He went to the long mirror to the wall and twirled me around.

"You look shmexy, fit, cute, babyish, adorable, fit, fit and fit!"

"Thanks, Wait Matt are you sure your not a beautician?" I giggled.

"Hmm.. maybe. What's it to you?" He laughed. "C'mon we're going to be late, my family can't wait to meet you."

I grimaced.

"I'm not sure. What if they don't accept me?" I asked; worrying about nothing.

"Don't worry! Chillax." He inhaled; his arms firmly around my waist.

We got to the car and we saw Regina. She waved at me, and i waved back. Matt opened the door for me and I sat in. He put our favourite song on Beat again by JLS.

It was a 10 minute journey to his house.

"We've decided to cancel the Yatch. If that's okay with you?" He looked into my eyes.

"It's okay!" I muttered.

He stopped the car infront of his house. It was exactly like mine. But it was less busy. Unlike the street I lived on had too many traffic jams and noisy party neighbors.

He opened the door for me and slid me in his arms.

"Not now Matt, please?" I chocked out.

He laughed silently and let me down. We walked together into his house. The main rooms were upstairs. I took a deep breath.

"Here let me introduce you to my family; this is my dad Michael. My mother Thereasa and my kid sister Rosalie." He introduced me to everyone.

"Hey, welcome!" Rosalie greeted me.

"Hey Rosalie, it's nice to finally meet you."

She had cute chubby cheeks, very small and gorgeous looking. With a bright smile across her face.

"Please, call me Rose!" She said.

Thereasa and Michael greeted me.

"So when are we going to have dinner?" Rose asked Michael impatiently.

Matt huffed and took me outside the room.

"Don't you just hate sisters?" He asked me.

"No. How can you say that? She's your cute sister, after all."

"Forget it. Let me show you my room."

He grabbed me and held me in his arms. Taking me to his room; he let me down. I started walking around the room. It was quite unusual for a football player to have such a tidy room. He had a large circled shape bed in the middle of the room; on one side of the wall he had his music disks and CD player, on the other he had a balcony (just like mine) having a view of a swimming pool and his bird house. I noticed by his chest of drawers there was a picture of him and me. I smiled walking towards the photo.

"Hey, is this the photo you took of me and you from the party?" I asked, touching the frame.

"Yep it is."

I looked back at him.

"What's wrong?"

"Nothing, I thought you wouldn't mind being at my house. I'm sorry about the Yatch thing."

"Chill Matt, it's okay." I said, still looking at the photograph.

It was of me and Matt in Regina's party. After he'd attacked us he asked Ozzy to take a photo of us. Ugh, I always shuddered thinking of that monster Ozzy.

"I LOVE this photo. You look so beautiful and pretty, I look like a weird monster that's going to eat you up." He laughed.

"No. You look incredibly cute and gorgeous." I smiled looking down, growing redder by the minute.

He brushed my cheek, and pulled my face up.

"C'mon we've gotta eat something or it looks like you might pass out of starvation." He grinned, kissing my forehead.

We walked to the dining room holding hands. Thereasa made Chinese rice, Spanish curry and Indian chicken tikka. We ate everything she made. I had a spoonful of rice and a bit of the curry. I wasn't so hungry. Neither was Matt. After everyone ate, I helped clear away the dishes and got to know Thereasa better.

"Oh Eshaye, Dear you don't have to do this you know," She said to me when we were in the kitchen.
"It's okay. I like helping around at home and at others, even though we have a cook and cleaners" I smiled.
We started chatting for a long time even after we long cleaned the kitchen.
"So... you both are dating?" Thereasa asked me.
"Yeah." I replied; stupid esh one word thats so dumb!
"Taking it serious?"
I didn't answer. I blushed, then turned brighter then even more and at the end i was a fully red tomato. Thereasa chuckled. I smiled nervously. Matt walked into the kitchen.
"Yo Esh. Your freakin' red. Dude what's wrong?"
"She's shy Matt."
Matt roared with laughter. I felt like banging my head on a truck with blades. I stood up and smiled at Thereasa. 😆 😡
"I think i wanna go home?!" I looked at Matt, who stopped laughing.
"Ariite, lemme drop you off."
"It was nice to meet you Esh, do come again sometime." She smiled. 😃 <<<
"You too."
We walked out of the house and upto the car. He offered to open the door for me but i refused opening it myself. He was seriously angry or something, you could tell with his expression. We sat in the car but he didn't play any music.
"What's the matter Matt?"
"Nothing."
"O K A Y."
"Why were you so red like a tomato in the kitchen with mum?" He asked me looking carefully at my face.
"Nothing really. I just went red." 😳
He inhaled a deep breath and closed his eyes leaning back on his seat. 🥱
"It's nothing Esh baby. Your just nervous." 😊
I didn't answer him. He rolled his eyes and held my hand.
Edited by SeliinaBaybee12 - 16 years ago

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