The Beginning of Something.. (Update pg29[short]) - Page 2

aww seems like sajan moment...LOL hopefully she finds him

^^ haha, I didn't even think about Sajan! Totally true, they could fit this story.😍

where is the twist? no twist in the story, no spice..LOL

Originally posted by: Terenaina

where is the twist? no twist in the story, no spice..LOL

haila! You don't think her not being able to find him is a good enough twist! 😆😆 I'll think of something.. I know something special that I suggested to the creatives of sajan's story.. I'm so using that one.. its so sweet. 😳😳

That suppose to be a twist kully? I want shocking surprising stuff....LOL that's why I love thriller movies. can't wait to read it

Shocking stuff... I'll have to think of something really good..

Originally posted by: Ms.GoodMorning

Shocking stuff... I'll have to think of something really good..

This is really strange. I posted my reply last night and it somehow disappeared. Oh well, this is what I wrote.

Originally posted by: sonam_s

This is really strange. I posted my reply last night and it somehow disappeared. Oh well, this is what I wrote.

I have no words to express how beautiful of a person and a writer you are. Such stories can only be written by someone who strongly believes in the beauty of everlasting love. The story is beyond words and i'm really looking forward for the guy to hold her in his arms under the stars and tell her how beautiful her set of eyes look at night. 😳

Aww. 🤗🤗 Thank you, Sonam. I think your comment was more beautiful than my whole story. 😆😆

About your post disappearing, I guess IF was having issues, and for a few hours, anything posted on IF got deleted.

Edited to add: Just in case you sent me a pm, it wasn't working either.

Originally posted by: Terenaina

okay if u don't want to do shocking stuff, FIND, it's okay don't do it😆

If I can't think of something, I'll steal it from a bollywood movie. 😆😆