Beautiful Mirror, Make me lucky- Update p.22

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@Terenaina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#151

Thanks yaar. I'm writing the story by using how people normally talk. I don't know if I can get better at writting but I'll try...lol

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Posted: 16 years ago

#152

Yeah u finally updated!! Lovely part!!! Hopefully sunshine realises soon!!! Continues soon!

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@Terenaina

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Posted: 16 years ago

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okay will continue tomorrow inshallah with a happy story.....enough of the sad stories already lol

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@Robsessed.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#154

Yay! You updated! Wahoo!

Aww, poor Sunshine. Does Kunal like Meera? Just curious.

I think you're good at writing, just use seperate sentences for their lines.

Other then that you are an amazing author // writer x

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@Terenaina

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: SeliinaBaybee12
Yay! You updated! Wahoo!

Aww, poor Sunshine. Does Kunal like Meera? Just curious.

I think you're good at writing, just use seperate sentences for their lines.

Other then that you are an amazing author // writer x

We will find out who the other girl is in the next update😆

okay, will use seperate sentences for their lines thanks for the tip😳

thank you so much

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Posted: 16 years ago

#156

finally kunal's a jerk, a two-timing jerk, i fell bad for sunshine, i hope ladyluck appears from somewhere out of thin air..

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chandni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#157

ladyluck is fine but we all know that she will have to learn that its not all about looks na 😲

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@Terenaina

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: 090909as
finally kunal's a jerk, a two-timing jerk, i fell bad for sunshine, i hope ladyluck appears from somewhere out of thin air..

He is a big time jerk. I hate guys like him😆

yup surprise package of happiness coming soon😉

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@Terenaina

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: *Nishi*
ladyluck is fine but we all know that she will have to learn that its not all about looks na 😲

we'll see what happens.... your right, it's not always about looks😉

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@Terenaina

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 14

Sunshine feeling hopeless and depressed. The sad part is that she still have feelings for Kunal even though he's a jerk. She'll feel jealous whenever she thinks about the moment he said he likes another girl too.

It isn't only Kunal that's bringing Sunshine's mood down. She used to work in a place where she didn't get along with the workers. She quit that job. Now she has no job at all.

And it wasn't just Kunal and work that was bringing her down. In school, there were three girls that bothered her a lot. They criticize how she worked in the school lab, whenever she did something wrong, they would laugh and point at her.

Sunshine just hated her life. As she was walking feeling so tired from being stressed out, the rain starts to pour. It seems like every time Sunshine is feeling sad, the rain starts to pour down. It was raining on and off again for months. As she was walking down to get some ice cream because she felt that ice cream will help her cheer up in a way. She finishes so many ice cream but it didn't help her.

She was walking all sad and depressed but than she sees a big beautiful rainbow that overshadow the whole sky. She heard someone calling her "Sunshine. Sunshine." She looked everywhere but didn't see anyone. She went back to that ice cream place and she saw LadyLuck. Sunshine was so happy to see Ladyluck.

But LadyLuck told Sunshine, "Your not trying your best. You always want the easy way out. I love helping you but first you have to help yourself. I'll give you two weeks to get yourself together. Find a job. Go back to school. And find ways to be happy. Be independent."

Sunshine says, "Okay, I'll try but what if I fail?"

Ladyluck says, "Life is all about taking chances. If you tried your best and you still failed. I'll help you out."

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