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Archana

@Girl_2007

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: *Nishi*

aawwww thankooo😳 actually im done now😲😆 not much changed really.. i dont think u have to go back and read unless u want to😆 btw... if u have any ideas/suggestions feel free to tell me😉

😆 ok..

well, i dont have any suggestions.. 🤔 just write what comes to ur mind, as much crazier, better. 😃😆 i like this story the way it is 😆

will u update soon?😳

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chandni

@*Nishi*

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

ya..thats why.. 😆 i liked the english-hindi-spanish/russian/english whatever language.. 😆 and the meaning too.. 👏

yep, in spanish means that exactly, thats why i got it... i think, u changed the title then for language problems kya? 😕😛

wow.. russian.. 😛

😆😆😆 i know so many lanugages hehe. I try to use as many as i can in my thoughts also😃😆

aawww thanks sooo much!! no i just didnt think it sounded right😕😆 i like jalwa😉 but if u like fabrika better i might change it 😲

ya russiu😆

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chandni

@*Nishi*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

😆 ok..

well, i dont have any suggestions.. 🤔 just write what comes to ur mind, as much crazier, better. 😃😆 i like this story the way it is 😆

will u update soon?😳

haha yeah... it kinda feels like im trying to hard though right now🤔 I think its just that i havent written in a while I'll get used to it.. now that u want more i will write more often😉 I just write this story for me really.... Im always having crazy/stupid thoughts of things happening to my friends😆😛 If no one comments or anything thats fine... but it does encourage me a lot to keep writing 😳 Thanks for reading and commenting 😳

hahahhaha

achaa😲 ok i will update this evening if i get the time😆😳

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Archana

@Girl_2007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#124

oh wow ... wats all this?? =O... hehe... lol...

erm. im sorry, will reply u tomorrow... have to go.. nice talking to u Nishi =D

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chandni

@*Nishi*

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Girl_2007
oh wow ... wats all this?? =O... hehe... lol...
erm. im sorry, will reply u tomorrow... have to go.. nice talking to u Nishi =D

haha im looking for some nice dresses for the story😆😆😆

awww... ok bye😭😃

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chandni

@*Nishi*

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#126

Shal, ali, and nishu run into the crowd but its too late. The people have already closed the doors and they are left outside.

Shal- aaaagghhh what are we supposed to do now?? Everyone else is inside including Sadia, varsha, sandy, and sania and we're stuck out here with that old guy over there eating a pretzel.

nish- this sucks

ali- yeah...

So they find a place to sit on the ground against the huge window and wait. And wait.. just sitting there u know. Then they see a blurry shadow of some one or some THING coming closer to them. It's making its way over to where they are sitting... And slowly... slowly... THen all of a sudden the door behind him flings open and knocks him on the ground. There are two girls screaming and dancing there way out the door and into the lady's restroom 😆. The old man is still lying face down on the floor (pretzel flew across the room) when Ali makes a run for it through the doors. "Sorry Nishu and Shal. I gotta go to this concert", he says as he runs through the door.

Sharlene and Nisha are speechless. Everything happened so fast that they didn't even know what had happened. So they lie there again. Sharlene sitting on the bench with her head against the window and Nishu spread out on the floor looking as if she is about to die.

It isn't until they try to talk to Ali that they understand what had just happened a few minutes before.

Nish- where the heck did Ali go? 😕😆

*Shal in deep thought look*

Shal- I've got it!!

Nish- huuhh.....🥱

shalu re tells everything that had just happened and they are both in shock😲

Nishu regaining her senses, leaps toward the pretzel that flew into the flower pot nearby. She shoves the pretzel into her mouth as if she had never eaten in her life. All this time Sharlene, sitting across the room is looking at her like she'd just lost her mind.

Shal- Nisha... we've ate dinner only 1 hour ago....

Nish- LIES. We haven't eaten in 12 days😡

Shal- 😲

Nish- come here... my sweet little french frie (like potato lol)

Shalu is digesting all of this. She realises that there is only one explanation to Nishu's behavior.

Shalu makes her way over to her....

Shalu- Nishu dear... its ok.. all you need is some food and you'll be all better okay? Come on dear 😳 I've got a few extra punds. Let me go buy u a.... Burger😆 (Author note-that word is just too funny😆)

Nishu steps back away... making hissing sounds 😆

Shalu- Oh I see... You want a milkshake also?

Nish making yes hissing sounds😆😆😆

Shalu runs to get her burger and shake

Shalu- ok Nishu... I have your food here in my hands😃

Nish- NEIN

shalu-... what nein😡 U will EAT to get BETTER... OKAY???😡

Now shalu loosin it 😆

Nishu- hiss hiss

Shal- You better watch it young lady😡😡😡 I'm gonna shove this down ur pathetic lil throat and you are going to LIKE it 😡

Nish gettin tiny bit scared😆

Shal- AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH 😡 *slams burger into Nishu's mouth*

Nish screaming and spitting out burger 🤣

Shalu- GAHAHHHHHHHA😡

Mother with todler walks by....

toddler- Mummyyyyyyyy😭

Mother- come on sweety. Geez the kids these days are just barbaric.

Song of inspiration for this lovely update of.... Idiots ka Jalwa

Inside and out - Feist

Copyright of Chandni White😆

Edited by *Nishi* - 16 years ago

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.driftingaway

@.driftingaway

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Posted: 16 years ago

#127

aww nice part nish 😆😆😆 p.s why is the word burger funny 😳🤣 me likey burger 😎

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chandni

@*Nishi*

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: aishah02

aww nice part nish 😆😆😆 p.s why is the word burger funny 😳🤣 me likey burger 😎

WHY IS IT FUNNYYYYYYYY??????????😲

Aishah... just say it... burger😲 say burger outloud😲

its ridiculously hilarious🤣

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chandni

@*Nishi*

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#129

I realised that writing papers are easier when I'm writing on the internet. So since this has to do with FranMany, I thought I would just type it up here and post it😉 Hope u like it

Edited by *Nishi* - 16 years ago