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Hey everyone 😃 Bonjour 😳😆
This is my story I wrote. you guys are missing out for not reading😆 For a few months now, I've been trying to write another story. About a violinist. I thought I could really relate to the girl because I play violin myslef 😳 I also tried taking tips from Stephenie Meyer. She said she could get into her characters heads and know what they were thinking. They were her best friends. Her CHILDREN even!!! 😲😲😲 She said when she first started writing, scenes and conversations kept pouring inside her head and it was like she was watching a movie. I tried and tried for it to become like that for me 😔 I wanted to know everything about my characters and write like crazy. But you know..... I couldnt 😭 The whole time I kept thinking about my best friends on IF and msn 😆😆Sadia, Sania, Ali, And anshu and hinnu yes and even asma 😆. all the crazy things they could do. I kept thinking up scenes between me and sadia. How we would react if we saw each other and fun stuff we could do together 😳 I was thinking up such crazy and stupid thinks I would laugh so hard at myself and my mom and sister would be so clueless 😆😆😆 I kept trying to focus on Miranda (violinist character) But I would keep on getting interupted by Sadia and Ali 😡 I was trying so hard to push those thoughts out of my head 😭 no matter how funny they were 😭😭
Then finally one night while I was brushing my crappy smelling mouth 😆 I was thinking of sadia and sania and everyone... and then sadia as a fashion designer 😲😲 and then all these thought started coming in and i couldnt stop it 🤣and then I thought how cool it would be if I could post this on IF or something cuz it's sooo funnnyyyyy 🤣. Then I realized. THIS is my story. Atleast for a while now 😆. I think up crazy hilarious stuff that could happen to me and my friends and write them down 😆😳😃. I really really hope you enjoy this 😃
WARNING: This story is very dumb and stupid. The story line weird and the characters have problems. I don't blame you if you can't understand anything....😆 It's basically just the thoughts going through my head.. 😛
Characters:
Ali- smart hot guy in love with "S___a" 😳🤣age 18 loves body building. Quiet but smart and funny. One day he will be famous for something.
Sadia- Fashion designer age 17, lives in paris 😃 Cousins with Nishi, and Sania. shes also very beautiful 😃 She loves messing around and has a passion for fashion. One day she hopes to become famous fashion designer.
Sania- Cousins with nishi and sadia. she deosnt do any work. just sits around all day flirting with guys and writing funny stories that happened to her at the bus stop 😆
Hinna- servant of the house....right now 😉 Very bossy and doesnt talk much when shes in good mood. enjoys drinking tea and shopping with her bf😃
Sharlene (Shalu/Shals)- Best friends with Nishi. 😃 The CUTEST and COOLEST kid u will ever meet. 😉
Nishi- (chandini) me😆😃 um... will edit this later.. dunno what to say about myself🤔
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Parts~

part 1- page 1

part 2 - page 2
short part - page 2
part 3- page 3
part 4 - page 5
part 5 - page 5
part 6 - page 5
part 7 - page 6
part 8 - page 6
part 9 - page 7
part 10 - page 9
part 11 - page 9
part 12 - page 13
part 13 - page 16
part 14 - page 20
part 15 - page 23
part 16 - page 23
part 17 - page 28
part 18 - page 28
part 19 - page 31
part 20 - page 31
part 21 - page 33
part 22 - page 34
part 23 - page 40
part 24 - page 46
part 25 - page 47
part 26 - page 51
part 27 - page 60
part 28 - page 64
part 29 - page 65
part 30 - page 71
part 31 - page 74
part 32 - page 75 (short)
part 34 - page 82
part 35 - page 82
part 36 - page 84
part 37 - page 85
part 38 - page 87
part 39 - page 87

Edited by *Nishi* - 16 years ago
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Chapter 1 😆
Paris, France~
btw.....Sadia is a fashion designer 😃
Sadia- Hinaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 😡
Hinna- Yesh mam?
Sadia- mera chai kahan hai!? 😡 gimme now 😡
Hinna- ok sorry mam.
(Brings chai)
Sadia- See im working so hard. dont inturpt me ok? I have all these paper work to do now jao.
(Hinna looks at sadias screen)
Hinna- Lekin mam, ur screen....it has msn and facebook and youtube. And look....IF too....
Sadia- Did i ask for to look at ma screen???? 😡 JAO apne kam karoooooo 😡😡😡 And I want HUGE donut tooo
Hinna runs super fast 😆
Los Angeles, USA~
Irfan (body building trainer guy😆)- ALI 😡 GO ALI u have 5 mins..... go go goooooo yes much better
Ali- *sreamin* aaaahhhhhhh 1.....aaaaaaahh.....2 aaaahhhhh....3aaahhhhhhhhh
Irfan- u can do it ali!!!! 😡 You want her to notice u dont u???? she wont recognize a puny guy like u..... yes u can do itttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*few mins later*
training over 😆
Ali- wow boss that was gr8 training, eh? 😳 😆
Irfan- Heeey.... don't get to cheesy... and yes it was a good training. Next time we will do this and we will get the bigger weights. You are looking better since first time 😆
Ali- gee tanks boss 😆
Ali gets phone call..... its Nishi in Zurich (Switzerland) 😳
Ali- Hello?
Nishi- Hellooo bhaiya 😃
Ali- Oh heey chandu.... how u?
Nishi- Im doing good bhaiya. Tell Irfan i says hi 😆 And I'm sorry ali I cant make it to our live online thingy today im sorry You see, it's very cold in zurich right now and me and Anshu were playing snowball fight. I catch pneumonia 😭 Shorry Ali 😭
Ali- aww its ok Nishoo 😃 WHAT!? 😡 You playing outside and catch cold?????? GO TO BED RIGHT NOW 😡😡😡 you need sleep. I cant believe u did this 😭😭😭 how could you be so careless???😭😭 Aur Anshu ki saath......😡You know I will get mad at u Go eat some soup and get sleep.
Nishi- I am soooooooooooo sorry bhaiyaaaa 😭 I will go eat soup and go to bed right after I go to the doctors today ok? 😃 I don't know if its pneumonia yet...
Ali- Ok ok.... but please be careful from now on..... bye jaan. 😃
Nishi- thanks ali 😃😃 Say hi to Sadia for me 😳
Ali- ok I will 😃
Zurich, Switzerland~
Nishi thinking- aahh..... what a lovely day.... *sneeze*
I think I'll go get my cam to send some pics to Sadia di di and Ali 😳😳
Nish takes pics...... 😆
She goes to doctors place.
Nishi- Hallo Dr. Rosenzweig. Wie gehts?
Dr.- Oh hallo Ms. Mehta (haha... indian name 😳) Wie gehts gut 😆
Eng now 😆😆😆
Dr.- I have looked at ur charts n stuff... blah blah......bloooo....balalalalaa..a.aa.a.a.a.......german words.....blah.......
u dont have pneumonia!!!!
Nish start dancing 😆😆😆
Awwww danke shooo much Dr. Rosenzweig 😃😃😃 I mean thankoo God!!! 😃😃😃 That I dont have flu or anything 😳
In the beautiful city of Zurich.... 😳 Nishi Mehta goes shopping for flowers 😃 She finally buys flowers after hrs of chosing 😆 Btw, she is wearing Sadia's latest shalwar design called.... Twilight 🤣
She wraps up flowers n mails them to Paris 😃 Sadia will LOVE these - Nishi thought 😆😆
A lady screams 😲😲😲 *aaaaaaaaaaaaah un vacheeeee!!!!*
Nishi runs outside to see what people screamin about then she hear....
Moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
😆
😆
Nishi- Oh my goodness!!! 😲 Nooooooooooooo😭
****la fin**** 😆
dunno if anyone will like.......
Edited by *Nishi* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaar i loved it.yaar this is gr8..and love sadia character and where is my kinny😡
this is not done yaar
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Himanivineet

yaar i loved it.yaar this is gr8..and love sadia character and where is my kinny😡

this is not done yaar
cont soon

hahaha such short comment 😆😆😆 whatever though... it took ju 10 mins 😆 thankss 😳😳😳 yeah sadia is funnny 😆😆😆 you'll see much more of her 😃 and her wacko self 😳 i looove herrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr😆
no its not done 😲y does it look done to u? 😆
ok 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh yeh 😆 u and ur kinny will be here soon 😳😃😃

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whaaaaat 😆 ok 😃
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Awwwwwwwwwwww nishoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo//// first ov alll🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

em a fashion designer 😆 haha kooooooooooooool😃
u're a gr8 writer .. seriously and i hopee ur dream ov writing a book comes true very soon .. and thts so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet u wrote an ff on us 😆 hahaha it was so funny loved my charachter 😆 and all the other charachters mwahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 😆


cant wait to read more 😆

Edited by bindaas_gal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bindaas_gal

Awwwwwwwwwwww nishoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo//// first ov alll🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

em a fashion designer 😆 haha kooooooooooooool😃
u're a gr8 writer .. seriously and i hopee ur dream ov writing a book comes true very soon .. and thts so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet u wrote an ff on us 😆 hahaha it was so funny loved my charachter 😆 and all the other charachters mwahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 😆


cant wait to read more 😆

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww im sooooooooo glad ju liked it!!!!! yeah em so sweet arent i 😆 really? 😲 ali was laughin so hard twiceeeeee Je m'appelle funny bear. 🤣 woopssss🤣
awwww yeah i love ur character tooo 😆 like always on fb, and IF msn naa 😆😆 hey do u think i should write some embarassing stuff about ali? 😲😲😲

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