NEVER TOO LATE (warrior high ff) {part 4 updated} - Page 4

Originally posted by: SalinaKhan

Nice update, like how you describe Parth's mum as the devil in his love life...😆. Will be waiting for the next update.

thank u so much salina..
means a lot..
lol i believe that she is a devil in their life 😆😆
updating next part now..

Originally posted by: anki01

Yaay...finally u r writing...m so so happy atlast u listened to me...ok now plz don't kill me m late bt m sure not that late😆

Aw..so sweet of u babes of making me popular my name in IF 😆

I didn't did nythng...it wasn't required yaar...I LUV U 2 Babes❤️ 🤗

M sure readers won't spam msgs to me..they gonna love reading it😳

I read the comments...see I told u...u will get positive response😉 unnecessarily u were scared..

Ok..coming to FF

Here I go...

A brilliant...amazing start..I liked the intro and character sketch..vei beautifully described abt them..bringing out their characters or say features..I liked the precap of warriors stories...good 1

Afcourse it's awesome👏

Don't be so happy coz I will be ur deadly critic over here😆

It's a superb start...waiting for next part😉

Love u tonne😳

lol.. u never know when u start getting msgs.. dont be so over confident 😉😆😆
thank u thank u soo much.. m glad that u like it..
really means a lot !!🤗
dont worry all critics are welcome here 😉😆
updating next part now..
tc

Originally posted by: ankusanu

Ok i admit..
I m late...in commenting
Bt i m here fr veebharth n u my friend
Yes veebharth d soulmates are seperated
Nice write up...
Update soon.
Thanks

thank u so much pri..
reallu means a lot..
i know u r die hard vibharth fan..
still u read the ff really means a lot to me..
will be updating now..😊😳😳

In day we can keep ourselves with the things that don't matter.. with the things that will engage us !! but in night its we "all alone".. specially at the time when you want to run away from yourself.. night become the time that doesn't seems to get over so easily !!

Today the sky was so dark as if someone had thrown a blanket over the earth... as if even the earth wants to accompany our warriors in their sorrows !! even the earth wasn't at peace, was disturb and sad to see the situation how can just one single day turn out to be like this..??

But may be the blanket that was thrown over earth was moth-eaten, cause their tiny holes that were allowing the heavens light to fall on earth.. as if trying to say where there is darkness there will be light of hope.. these stars were trying to tell our warriors that there is still a hope..!!

For our warriors this night is like the one where time just not seems to be passing so easily.. every minute is passing as hours and forcing them to think of this situation again and again...

in boys dorm.. dorm was silent one can easily hear there heartbeat.. but our warriors cant, cause the noise that their thoughts were making didn't allow them to listen to anything else.. Everyone was trying to sleep but they all are ending up in just simply turning sides in their bed..

Charlie lying on his bed and thinking of the moments he spent with neeti and then remembering tat famous day where he brutally murder his own love story.. and thinking
" I know niti what I've done is can't be forgiven so easily.. but can't u see that I'm changed now and u changed me.. today only cause of you m able to understand this world more clearly.. your love gave me the strength to face this world for who i m.. i don't have to think about this society anymore that what they will say and how will they react.. i can be myself !! i can call my dad as my dad in front of this world m no more ashamed of him.. u made me realize this !! cause of u today i m able to give that respect to father that he deserves !! your taught me to be a better man !! and now m not gonna make any more mistakes.. neeti i wont loose u.. i wont allow u to leave me.. i will show u that i m changed and that i truly love u.. i will get ur trust and respect back !! i will..."
*with a smile and in a hope that he will start a fresh start from tomorrow.. he closes his eyes and dreams of his Juliet"

Sid lying on his bed but is not able to sleep with all the scenes playing again and again in his mind.. his mother told him that uttu is his brother, the way he broke the heart of his love.. with all these thoughts he was not at all been able to sleep and thought its better to go outside and have some fresh air.. the moment he came outside from his dorm he thought to call his dadi as she is the only person who trust him and understands him.. but then how will he tell her that uttu is his brother.. so thought to better go to gym and practice his boxing.. he headed towards the gym room.. while punching the bag.. he thinks..
"siyali i do love u.. if its ever possible for u then do forgive me !! but uttu is my brother and i cant take away his happiness from him.. he already sacrificed a lot cause of me and now i want to give him everything that he deserves.. siyali but my love for u is true... but we cant be together !! please forgive me.."
and with the last punch on the punching bag he gets down on his knees and remembers all the beautiful moments he spent with siyali and starts crying.. his tears were just not stopping... he was crying and saying i love u siyali..

uttu he was lying still in his bed and thinking of all the past moments that has happened in his life.. remembering how he came to wh.. he become friend with ayaaz and then what ayaaz did.. how her mother died.. how krissan came into his life.. how he met angela.. how he came to know about her illness.. everything n tears were rolling down from his eyes..he was thinking :
"how strange this life is.. siyali always thought that when we come to warrior high our life will change we will be happy we will be able to secure our future.. but here all of us got only one thing that is betrayal today all three of us are broken.. siyali who was one of the strongest person i know in my life today even she is broken.. neeti she smiles only for us but i know how hurt she is !! n maa this school even took away my maa from me.."
with all these thoughts he got out from his bed and started moving outside the dorm in order to take some fresh air..he sat in front of boys dorm facing in opposite direction and lost in his thoughts..

parth the one who never show any of his emotions to anyone.. today even he was disturb n trying hard to get a sleep but all he is getting a loop memories of a day.. how they (vibharth) were romancing in lib.. then teasing each other with the fake anger.. how her mom came to shl and how happy he was telling her tat he is in love.. then how his mother insulted his love in front of urmila and kamini...he was feeling tore between his mom and his love, two ppl who r the important part of his world..his mom who loved him, who gave him birth.. instead of understanding and facing the world with him she insulted his love and then his love the angel of his life the one who showed him the way towards light.. today she is hurted coz of him.. their was train of thoughts and questions in his mind...
" the only thing that i have asked from universe was that they both live happy.. but today both are hurt coz of me..today both got insulted and somewhere the reason behind.. is me..i don't know whom to blame..?? should i blame my mother for everything that has happen.. yes i m angry from her, she should understand me.. she should be the one who help me to face this society..!! but she just came and turned my whole world round!! how happy i was to meet her.. but that happiness just.. mom i just wish tat i was able to explain u what u just did.. u put that person's job on stake who has responsibility of her whole family on her shoulder.. i just wished that u have asked from me once before doing this.. just ones !! and vibha mam how can she just give her resignation letter like this.. when i told her not to do so.. why she did this ?? cant she just trust me.. now how is she gonna handle her family ?? y these situation become so complicated..y this stupid society can just.."
with all these thought and in anger he got up from his bed and start moving out of dorm..

parth while moving out of dorm didn't notice that even uttu is sitting their and neither did uttu noticed tat parth came out of dorm.. they both were so lost in their thoughts that they crossed each other path without even noticing each other..

parth was going towards gym.. for doing his boxing practice as their are only two things that can handle his anger one is boxing n the other is vibha.. when he reached at gym he heard some noise that broke his train of thoughts and force him to peep in the room.. he notice sid crying his heart out.. sid was on his knees and all he was saying "siyali i love u.. please forgive me" the sound was audible that parth could hear it.. parth was bit shocked then y sid break siyali's heart when he loves her.. there was glimpse of truth and pain in sid eyes and one heart broken can easily understand and identify another heart broken that's what was happening with parth and sid.. for a moment he thought to go and console sid but then he remembered how sid made him drink and cause of it he broke his promise of never touching and drinking the alcohol in his life.. so instead of taking a step forward he took a step backward and start heading towards dorm..

on his way he was confuse with sid's behavior.. then he saw uttu sitting outside the dorm and goes towards him...
parth: utkarsh what r u doing here at this time ??(slightly patting on his back in order to bring him back to reality from his world)
uttu: bro..(shocked to see parth..but then replied) nothing bro just thinking that how much this wh has taken away from three of us when we came here.. we thought we will always stay happy but all this gave us is sadness.. instead to coming this shl we shd stay at our orphanage at least we would be happy..
parth: (notices that uttu is sad.. so to brighten up his mood he says..) oo so u wish to stay at orphanage instead of coming here then how would u meet me ur bro n angela n krissan (for teasing him he took their name)
uttu: (shying) bro u.. but u r right i shd focus on what i have rather than what i don't..!!
parth: i know.. now can v sleep ??
uttu with smile nods..
they both go towards their dorm and then tries to sleep both hiding their sadness from each other...

all of them were containing different emotions within them and trying to behave differently so no one get more sad seeing each others sad face..
but little they no that their is one thing that has changed.. and that is their personality.. today our warriors were getting mature.. they are not the same person that they used to be.. they r changed.. n changed for better !! and y not after all these changes are there cause of love..!!

all they should know is this one thing, that is..

who knows that these struggles make their story the great one.. the one which will be recorded in book for next generations !! 😉

Enjoyed reading this update, everyone's lost in thoughts of their respective partners. So painful and heart touching. Sid crying, only if Parth took the first step towards friendship. He should have asked him why he did what he did. Waiting for the next update😉.

You have highlighted their emotions so beautifully!! M spellbound
You're an amazing writer seriously!! Looking forward fr more updates
Continue soon pls :)
And the last line was just cherry on the cake "the dark doesn't destroy light it defines it" 😊

It was amazing and the emotions were beautifully portrait..👏👏

Yet another awesome part

Beautiful update

Really nice update shikha..
Parth still torn brwn two ppl he loves d most.. n uttu too lost ..
Felt sad fr sid..
Grt job..update soon n
Tkcr till den