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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
OMG! what an update!👏
Journey of Raj from his dreams! to reality!!😳

Reality is more interesting!😆..though dreams have its own importance but reality has its own taste!😉

Subh subh itna fight!!🤣

fighting for how they ended up in one room in one bed..then for his T-shirt😆 ... checking out each other in between..😉Preet want to drool over her hubby😳 and Raj going ga ga over her sexy wifey!😳
Raj is just too much..always make fun of her...😆"penguin dance"

and then

Kabab mein haddy Nihaal!😡

Cute fights are good for our health😳..its very necessary in the show as well funny moments are back after a period of time. Enjoying epis now...your updates makes me feel refresh.😃..I am enjoying your story a lot!😛

You poured all your efforts in this extraaa long update!😳

Its double treat for all of us!! 😉

Thanks for wonderful update...and yeah! update soon😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Brilliant update 👏
Waiting for the next part
Tanu221 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: .Suchi.

OMG! what an update!👏

Journey of Raj from his dreams! to reality!!😳

Reality is more interesting!😆..though dreams have its own importance but reality has its own taste!😉

Subh subh itna fight!!🤣

fighting for how they ended up in one room in one bed..then for his T-shirt😆 ... checking out each other in between..😉Preet want to drool over her hubby😳 and Raj going ga ga over her sexy wifey!😳
Raj is just too much..always make fun of her...😆"penguin dance"

and then

Kabab mein haddy Nihaal!😡

Cute fights are good for our health😳..its very necessary in the show as well funny moments are back after a period of time. Enjoying epis now...your updates makes me feel refresh.😃..I am enjoying your story a lot!😛

You poured all your efforts in this extraaa long update!😳

Its double treat for all of us!! 😉

Thanks for wonderful update...and yeah! update soon😆


Thanxx so much I was so scared no body will like it.i was waiting for comments. You guys have no idea how much effort I put in this I have no idea how to continue because show is running awesome - it's hard to match those dialogues in English - so there will be scenes like this

I will write next part after exams and I promise that will be better thanxx again
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: .Suchi.

OMG! what an update!👏

Journey of Raj from his dreams! to reality!!😳

Reality is more interesting!😆..though dreams have its own importance but reality has its own taste!😉

Subh subh itna fight!!🤣

fighting for how they ended up in one room in one bed..then for his T-shirt😆 ... checking out each other in between..😉Preet want to drool over her hubby😳 and Raj going ga ga over her sexy wifey!😳
Raj is just too much..always make fun of her...😆"penguin dance"

and then

Kabab mein haddy Nihaal!😡

Cute fights are good for our health😳..its very necessary in the show as well funny moments are back after a period of time. Enjoying epis now...your updates makes me feel refresh.😃..I am enjoying your story a lot!😛

You poured all your efforts in this extraaa long update!😳

Its double treat for all of us!! 😉

Thanks for wonderful update...and yeah! update soon😆


Thanxx I have been waiting for your comments " I was so scared if noone will like it. I put so much efforts in that. Thank you so so much anyway I'll be posting next after exams as the show is running awesome I have match that level . Thanks again
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Alisha-2887

Brilliant update 👏
Waiting for the next part

Hey thanks a lot actually I have no idea what to write next this is what I wanted to write and that took me 5 chapters I am quite expressive
But I am planning to write scenes like this only... Somehow interrelated but for now let's enjoy the show ... I am no match for their cool dialogues but I'll be posting soon please hang on
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Thanxx I have been waiting for your comments " I was so scared if noone will like it. I put so much efforts in that. Thank you so so much anyway I'll be posting next after exams as the show is running awesome I have match that level . Thanks again


Thanks to you dear! for giving such a lovely update !😳
Sorry for commenting so late!...
pr Der hai..andher nahi...😆

Yeah!..first focus on your exams...will be waiting for more...don't worry!😳


I forget to say ... you always mention title on your updates...I love that thing...keep it up!!👏😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: .Suchi.


Thanxx I have been waiting for your comments " I was so scared if noone will like it. I put so much efforts in that. Thank you so so much anyway I'll be posting next after exams as the show is running awesome I have match that level . Thanks again



Thanks to you dear! for giving such a lovely update !😳
Sorry for commenting so late!...
pr Der hai..andher nahi...😆

Yeah!..first focus on your exams...will be waiting for more...don't worry!😳


I forget to say ... you always mention title on your updates...I love that thing...keep it up!!👏😃
Awww thankxxx... I know title should be better than the update 😃😆😆 i 😎 😳 will update the index and them the titles will look cooler 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

The VISITOR !


"She is sooo pretty ! Lucky Bas***d ! "

Were the first thoughts that came to his mind when Preet opened the door.

"The morning couldn't be any better." He looked at her long, silky threads falling down perfectly to her waist. She was looking no less beautiful than yesterday even in these Clothes, no makeup needed.

" Natural beauty ! What a waste. She had to live like a boy for 18 years !! That's a long time !! " Nihal genuinely feels empathetic towards her.

" But even then - here she stands in all her beauty - more beautiful than any other girl in the whole village. "

He knew it because he had seen them all and none of them was able to capture his attention like she did- in the first glance.

Goes without saying there's no one better than her when it's comes to shooting. Nobody means nobody - forget girls even professionals can't beat her. Yesterday was just another show of Manpreet Pawaniya's talent.

" She is a privilege - it's a blessing to be able see this beauty with boldness - looking brilliant as ever - even in these clothes - men clothes - why is she wearing a t-shirt, her secret is out already !??? - OMG - Raj's clothes !! "

Nihal lost expressions turned into a frown when he imagined them together -

"Why ! Aren't they like on - 'I HATE YOU - NO ! I HATE YOU MORE' - terms ?? So how come did they end up like this ?? Within hours ! "

Before he can take in the sight before him completely, his view was ravaged by a broad naked chest . He looked up met his glaring gaze on him.

" why are you here " Raj asked annoyed, putting his T-shirt over his head.

Nihal draw back to avoid his fist while he covered up his body.

" First he ruined my golden chance to talk to her and now he is trying to punch hme deliberately ! Such rudeness even when he has everything anybody can ask for - pure Bajwa blood, his family, a potential for becoming a shah and not to mention his recent achievement - a gorgeous wife - in his clothes -in his room ! Do I need any more reasons to hate this ba****d "

" I was passing by and I heard someone screaming - sooo - I..."

He replied carefully, trying to look over Raj's shoulder - to which Raj crossed his arms coming closer - failing his attempt to see her.

" Sooo... Whhhaaat !"

" So I thought to check on you guys if something's wrong "

Nihal gave a contemplating look to Raj. He knew if Raj came to know about his sudden interest in Preet, he'll not even let him near her - leave alone talking.

" no body needs your concern here - infact nobody needs you any whe..."

" There was a coackroach, but, we are fine. Thank you !"

Preet cut Raj's bitter snap with her generous words and sweet smile peeping from Raj's shoulder. Nihaaal forgot about his words. He forgot that he even existed.

" That's great !! Sooo, if you need anything - let me know ... As youuu "

Nihaal replied with the same sweetness and generosity. Who wouldn't ?? Her smile could bring the mountains down - he was a mere homosepan - flash and bones.

" Does Mohiniii - jiii - knows about your new found concern towards... Us " Raj said with a pause blocking his view again.

" Where is she by the way ?? Busy " Raj taunted.

" Yes ! Busy with your wedding gift ! That was quick you know ! " Nihal chaffed, " your wedding "

" Yep ! I know I am a little fast to catch on" Raj snapped back.

"What about you !!! Anything special for the - NEWLYWEDS "

"Huh "

Preet peeked from Raj's behind with a surprised expression waiting for him to change his statement.

She was completely ignored by both the men. They both were too engrossed trying to burn each other alive with their stances that they didn't notice she was also the part of conversation seconds before.

" Ahem ! Ahem !"

Nihal looked at her and gave her a quick smile. He turned 90 to leave before he did something wrong. But stopped abruptly.

Nihal take swing motion to face Raj with a sly smile and slowly started -

"Actually I do have a special advice for you " he smiled coyly leaning closer to him - " when you came downstairs - dress carefully..."

He stopped to peek over his shoulder sending a last smile to Preet before whispering in his ear -

" I don't think papaji will like any of those hickeys "

And he left with long steps leaving a baffled Raj and confused Preet behind him.

He wished he hadn't gone there. It's been only one day and Raj is already getting on his nerves. He was busy cursing Raj when he bumped into Mohini.

" Hey watch out " he shouted without looking.

"Nihaaal " came an angry reply.

" Oh ! Sorry mummyji ! I didn't see you " he replied annoyed.

" I know ! You can't see anything now a days "

" Now what happened"

" Come with me ! I have something very important to talk you "

" Not now please ! I have an headache. I will talk to you later "

" It's about Preet "

Nihaal stopped in his track and looked at his mother. She looked serious and worried. And she wants to talk about preet.

" Fine ! Let's go "

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I know short update ! Sorry but I had to finish Nihal scene. Bear with me ! Till I come up with something exiting

Edited by Tanu221 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
OMG you're getting better with every update. Seriously loved your recent updates.. Just read the dream sequence and the rest and really liked it. Well done.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: laney

OMG you're getting better with every update. Seriously loved your recent updates.. Just read the dream sequence and the rest and really liked it. Well done.

😳😳 hey thankxxx... A lot😃😃😃 the dream sequence was my dream 😃😃 that was the first thing I wrote even before temple scene ... I am so glad you all loved it 😃😃 no negative comments yet ...👏👏 touch wood ...
Next chap will be on raj😳

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