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Ventalation needed
Hi there everyone. So i was writing exams and i stayed away from a few of my faverouit indian shows. But I am sure many of you know how it is when you have one at 5 then one at 6 even though you hate the one inbetween you watch it because mum or dad or someone else wants to watch it.
So getting back to the point. I have a show that no one else in my house besides me, likes to watch Vishkhanya from the promos the story seemed to be really interesting and I thought finally Zee tv has stopped showing boring saas bahu drama's.
So the story went something like this Kalpana is this beautiful vengeful women who has raised and kept her daughter behind closed doors her entire lif. while the whole road knows Kalpana has a daughter but are kind of intrigued as to why is the family hiding her. Could she have something possibly wrong with her?
Then enter Mallay, the son of Kalpana's nemisis Nanditha mital and neighbour. Kalpana is cetain if Mally sees Apu he will fall in love for her and then she can start out her whole plott forrevenge.
So after watching the first few episodes despite my doubts that this was going to be a cheap Naagin knock off. I genuinely enjoyed the show.
But I guess the writers decided no. They were going to do everything they possibly could to ruin a story that started off with an original fresh story by making it brandless and nothing but a cheap knock off.
I actually feel sorry for the main leads they actually had chemistry. But who ever is writing the story has got to be on LSD.
Faults with the plott line
*Kalpana and Nanditha's hatred for each other is inconsistent. It could be part of the whole mystrey but i think the writers are confused and have no idea what they are doing.
*Nanditha's litter of brothers that give me a sense of deja vu(I feel the writer went back and watched Naagin and thought lets add some men in for apu to kill maybe if she killed people people would find the show more interesting.
*Nanditha's brothers (the actors who play them) -They all seem like murderous goons.
*Illogical murder plots
*Apu becoming a murderer over her mothers insult and acting like a loon. (Honestly this girl was so sweet in the beggining but no the writers had to prove again they dont make sense and give reasons for people to stop watching).
*Mallays father being cured by falling down the stairs(Hay lets take all paraplegic people and push them down the stairs and suddenly find them cured)
*Apu's mom plus mallays father both being in wheel chair X_X
*Vardhaan, this chicks enterence and goody two shoe demeaner.
*I like innocent heroines but i mean really she is so sweet it gives me diabetes the chemistry between her and mallay is so forced.
*Marry the male lead to someone else(Sincerely the most irritating thing to watch ever-sapne suhane ladapan,Pavitra rishta arjun purvi etc)
*Vishkhanya having three lives X_X what are they cats?
*Bringing that annoyinh aunty from kuch kuch hota hai and main prem ki dewaani hoon as vardaans mom-ew
*Mallay marrying Vardhaan so quickly what happend to him wanting to wait for apu forever?
My futures hopes
*Vardhan dies prefably in the next episode(if Mallay starts to love her like ew)
*The writer adding more brothers for Nanditha i thought she was some high society aunty now she has 100 goon sadakchap brothers lol
*Stop trying to copy Naagin
*Do not make this a saas bahu drama
*Go slowly with Apu's revenge
*Add dept to the characters show her internal conflict, (IE her not wanting to hurt mallay)
*I feel like there are two many grey characters. I wish they made Mallay more complex how can he come from such a rotten family and be so nice
*DO NOT AND I MEAN THIS DO NOT MAKE APU MARRY ANY ONE BESIDES MALLAY
So who agrees with me?
CID
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