• Haunted Heritage • NeiVika & BhIdur FF Chapter Two Page 8 - Page 7

Loved it

I always said nah you guys are giving justice to NeiVika and i have a reason to said this ,ahh really such a great part .

And that Swastik production ki heroine line , oh God

Super excited for the next parts

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Chapter 2 - A Blissful Morning in Goa

"Humare Neil ki Shaadi Yuvika se karake humne koi Galati tho nehi kar dia na?" - Vidur asked

Rest of the conversation was exactly same that Bhoomi had seen in her nightmare because Bhoomi refused to change the course of events at least for that day and therefore she purposely broke that cup too..... Strange!

Bhoomi entered her room and looked at the picture of a loving young couple.... Yes her son Neil & her daughter in law Yuvika's photo,

"Pata hai Neil, teri Nani kaha karti thi jab jab jo jo hona hota hai woh hoke rehta hai, aur ushe badalna chaho tho damages jaida hoti hai, honestly beta I don't know Aaj jo hua woh kyun aur kaise..... I mean it's so bizarre" - Bhoomi took a deep breath

Bhoomi wiped her tears & continued -

"But somewhere deep down I just didn't feel like changing anything, Jo SAPNA dekha ushe sayed Haqeekat mein aaj main thoda sa badal sakti thi because I knew what your Papa gonna say next and all but I just felt like I shouldn't change anything.... Pata nehi yeh mere saath phir kabhi hoga ki nehi par aaj kuch na badal kar main yeh mauka, this opportunity to change something in my present, in my reality I want to keep it safe. I know this sounds so unrealistic and rubbish but MAA hnu na, kya pata sayed zindagi mein kabhi saach mein mujhe bohaaat jarurat pade ish.... Ashirwad ki! Kuch tho wajah hogi na jo aise SAPNA mujhe aaya, kya pata sayed yehi woh ek hatiyaaar ho jish se main tujhe apne AAP se dur jaane se rok saku"

Bhoomi broke down into tears remembering those words of Pandit Shashtri Ji

"AAP k Bete k Jeevan mein Aayu Rekha Bohat Kam hai, serf 29 Saal tak ki hi Jeevan Rekha hai"

Bhoomi and her blind faith Jo hota hai ache ke liye ho zaroori nahi

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Somewhere in Goa, Hotel Bluemoon

A beautiful young lady slowly opened her eyes & looked towards the large window, the beautiful view of sea beach was visible from her bed only, she found herself getting mesmerised at the beauty of nature, at the beauty of Goa....

Yuvika smiled a little and was about to move but she felt a heavy weight almost on her, she looked back at her side only to realise her Husband was asleep half on the bed and half on her as always! Literally his face was in between her neck and shoulder, his one arm was above her chest and his one leg was above her legs

She giggled at her husband's intimate sleeping habit

"Kyaaaaa hai Yuvi, I sleep like this almost daily except those days of yours phir tum daily kyun hasti ho mujhpe, how come you aren't habituated with this yaaar" - Neil murmured in half sleep without opening his eyes.

"Kyun ki tum lagte hi itne cute ho bilkul Buzzo ki tarha" - With this Yuvika ruffled his hair

"Baal pe haat nehiiii Yuviiiii" - Neil finally opened his eyes getting overprotective about his silky smooth hairstyle

Yuvika laughed out loud

"Aaachaaaaa rukoooo" with this Neil pulled her more closer to him, and tightly wrapped himself around her

"What the hell are you doing Neil" - Yuvika felt her temperature getting high due to the proximity, she closed her eyes

"Wohi jo roj karta hnuuuuu" - Neil said as he rubbed his beard against her organically red cheeks

Neil's breathing was so palpable near her lips that she found herself clutching his tshirt tightly.

Neil smiled enjoying the affect of his intimacy on her, he decided to tease her more

"Sooch raha hnu, NeiVi ki planning aaj hi kar lu" - Saying this Neil rolled her over, on top of him, taking her whole weight on himself.

Yuvika too decided to play along, she moved her her fingers on his face giving him a sensation that made him close his eyes....

"But Neil Prabhu hum yahan honeymoon pe nehi, aapki startup meeting k liye aaye hain" - With this Yuvika withdrew her hand and was about to get up but couldn't as Neil's hold was too tight

Neil opened his eyes & said

"Yeah yeah I know pehle business planning phir family planning blah blah"

Yuvika smiled and placed a soft kiss on his forehead

Neil instantly moved his face sideways, Yuvika placed another kiss on his cheek but before he could turn his face asking for a lip lock she pinched on his arms and quickly got up from his gym made body.

"Yaaaaaaar Yuvi TU subhaaaa hote hi Swastik Production ki Heroine type behaviour pe kyun aajati hai" - Neil asked in irritation

"Shut Up Neil, Mummy watches only that one serial, stop trolling her" - Yuvika said while getting up from the bed, fixing her messy state

"I am trolling you & your hormones" - With this Neil turned around to sleep for few more minutes

"You are trolling both of us, mummy for watching a serial and me for..... Wait a second, subhaaa hote hi matlab?" - Yuvika was dumbfounded

"Matlab wohi Jo tujhe samajh aaya, I am genuinely praising you for your late night activities" - Neil replied with a naughty smile

"SHUT Up Neil" - Yuvika threw her pillow on him & moved towards the washroom

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Ooh all this teasing and Swastik Production ki heroine ki tarah acting karna ……Arpita ji you are a genius 😘

Precap :

NeiVika meeting Digvijay Mahajan

Oooh looking forward to some Neil-DJ tashan !!

Originally posted by: MochaQueen

res

this time i will read and comment on weekend

No issues, take your time

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Chapter 2 is hilarious

Nice trolling of the PH too

So is DJ evil in your fanfic?

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Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Ohhh....

NeiVika as a married couple are bliss...that intimacy, comfort,abandon that marriage brings, when you are not scared to express your feelings in raw form of words...You captured it with beauty..

Such sweet NeiVika trademark moments...YUVIKA ruffling his hair, him pulling her closer, Yuvika's temperature rising, him being such a tease...Ohh NeiVi making process,YUVIKA is bold...

I was blushing throughout.....

" Swastik production heroine,her maa watching it, Neil teasing them"Hilarious

Ok so First part happened exactly like the previous chapter??? Bhumi didn't change anything bcz she was more concerned for Neil?

That's intriguing, I am very much interested in this aspect You are keeping the mystery intact...though it was confusing but I know you are building this confusion intentionally...

So eagerly waiting for the next chapter...Loved it

Not her Maa, her Parents are not alive, his maa means Bhoomi watches Swastik show, Yuvika calls Bhoomi Mummy

Thank You Asmi I was in dilemma about this particular part because I have never ever written romance before on any fiction, this is first time so Your comment made me feel good so thanks alot

Raat ka nasha abhi ankh se gaya nahi

UFFFFF!!!!!!!!!! Such a hot update!!

The way you weaved humor, affection, and a touch of romance is so worth appreciating!

Lovedddd how you captured the essence of their banter.

It left me with a warm feeling and a smile on my face

Looking forward to reading more of such pyaare pyaare hot hot chaps

STANDING OVATION FOR ROASTING NASTIK

Originally posted by: Spandan24

Loved it

I always said nah you guys are giving justice to NeiVika and i have a reason to said this ,ahh really such a great part .

And that Swastik production ki heroine line , oh God

Super excited for the next parts

Thank you Spandan

Originally posted by: Effervescent_R

Thank You

Originally posted by: agreatwcr

Raat ka nasha abhi ankh se gaya nahi

UFFFFF!!!!!!!!!! Such a hot update!!

The way you weaved humor, affection, and a touch of romance is so worth appreciating!

Lovedddd how you captured the essence of their banter.

It left me with a warm feeling and a smile on my face

Looking forward to reading more of such pyaare pyaare hot hot chaps

STANDING OVATION FOR ROASTING NASTIK

YOU liked it? That's such a huge satisfaction for me honestly Intimacy bit thik tha? First time I wrote something like that, I usually don't because I don't know how to put romance and physical intimacy in words Thank you

Inke intimate scene with teasing

Hayee aisa laga mereko NeiVika dikh gaya yeh sab karte hue ankho ke samne

That dialogue cracked me up "Subah hotehi swastik ke heroine ka behave karne lagti ho "

Waiting for next update