• Haunted Heritage • NeiVika & BhIdur FF Chapter Two Page 8 - Page 6

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: MochaQueen

Ab yeh SimJun kya hai? I only know SimJay

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Han honge RooJay smiley9

SAB honge except SimJun of course smiley37

you can't do this to simjun😑
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: MochaQueen

Ab yeh SimJun kya hai? I only know SimJay

You know SimJay yehi bohaaat badi baat hai smiley37

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Moonks

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Posted: 1 years ago
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they will haunt you by getting married in the showsmiley39
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Posted: 1 years ago
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they will haunt you by getting married in the showsmiley39

I don't give a damnnn about them smiley8

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Chapter 2 - A Blissful Morning in Goa


"Humare Neil ki Shaadi Yuvika se karake humne koi Galati tho nehi kar dia na?" - Vidur asked

Rest of the conversation was exactly same that Bhoomi had seen in her nightmare because Bhoomi refused to change the course of events at least for that day and therefore she purposely broke that cup too..... Strange!

Bhoomi entered her room and looked at the picture of a loving young couple.... Yes her son Neil & her daughter in law Yuvika's photo,

"Pata hai Neil, teri Nani kaha karti thi jab jab jo jo hona hota hai woh hoke rehta hai, aur ushe badalna chaho tho damages jaida hoti hai, honestly beta I don't know Aaj jo hua woh kyun aur kaise..... I mean it's so bizarre" - Bhoomi took a deep breath

Bhoomi wiped her tears & continued -

"But somewhere deep down I just didn't feel like changing anything, Jo SAPNA dekha ushe sayed Haqeekat mein aaj main thoda sa badal sakti thi because I knew what your Papa gonna say next and all but I just felt like I shouldn't change anything.... Pata nehi yeh mere saath phir kabhi hoga ki nehi par aaj kuch na badal kar main yeh mauka, this opportunity to change something in my present, in my reality I want to keep it safe. I know this sounds so unrealistic and rubbish but MAA hnu na, kya pata sayed zindagi mein kabhi saach mein mujhe bohaaat jarurat pade ish.... Ashirwad ki! Kuch tho wajah hogi na jo aise SAPNA mujhe aaya, kya pata sayed yehi woh ek hatiyaaar ho jish se main tujhe apne AAP se dur jaane se rok saku"

Bhoomi broke down into tears remembering those words of Pandit Shashtri Ji

"AAP k Bete k Jeevan mein Aayu Rekha Bohat Kam hai, serf 29 Saal tak ki hi Jeevan Rekha hai"


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Somewhere in Goa, Hotel Bluemoon


A beautiful young lady slowly opened her eyes & looked towards the large window, the beautiful view of sea beach was visible from her bed only, she found herself getting mesmerised at the beauty of nature, at the beauty of Goa....

Yuvika smiled a little and was about to move but she felt a heavy weight almost on her, she looked back at her side only to realise her Husband was asleep half on the bed and half on her as always! Literally his face was in between her neck and shoulder, his one arm was above her chest and his one leg was above her legs

She giggled at her husband's intimate sleeping habit

"Kyaaaaa hai Yuvi, I sleep like this almost daily except those days of yours phir tum daily kyun hasti ho mujhpe, how come you aren't habituated with this yaaar" - Neil murmured in half sleep without opening his eyes.

"Kyun ki tum lagte hi itne cute ho bilkul Buzzo ki tarha" - With this Yuvika ruffled his hair

"Baal pe haat nehiiii Yuviiiii" - Neil finally opened his eyes getting overprotective about his silky smooth hairstyle

Yuvika laughed out loud

"Aaachaaaaa rukoooo" with this Neil pulled her more closer to him, and tightly wrapped himself around her

"What the hell are you doing Neil" - Yuvika felt her temperature getting high due to the proximity, she closed her eyes

"Wohi jo roj karta hnuuuuu" - Neil said as he rubbed his beard against her organically red cheeks

Neil's breathing was so palpable near her lips that she found herself clutching his tshirt tightly.

Neil smiled enjoying the affect of his intimacy on her, he decided to tease her more

"Sooch raha hnu, NeiVi ki planning aaj hi kar lu" - Saying this Neil rolled her over, on top of him, taking her whole weight on himself.

Yuvika too decided to play along, she moved her her fingers on his face giving him a sensation that made him close his eyes....

"But Neil Prabhu hum yahan honeymoon pe nehi, aapki startup meeting k liye aaye hain" - With this Yuvika withdrew her hand and was about to get up but couldn't as Neil's hold was too tight

Neil opened his eyes & said

"Yeah yeah I know pehle business planning phir family planning blah blah"

Yuvika smiled and placed a soft kiss on his forehead

Neil instantly moved his face sideways, Yuvika placed another kiss on his cheek but before he could turn his face asking for a lip lock she pinched on his arms and quickly got up from his gym made body.

"Yaaaaaaar Yuvi TU subhaaaa hote hi Swastik Production ki Heroine type behaviour pe kyun aajati hai" - Neil asked in irritation

"Shut Up Neil, Mummy watches only that one serial, stop trolling her" - Yuvika said while getting up from the bed, fixing her messy state

"I am trolling you & your hormones" - With this Neil turned around to sleep for few more minutes

"You are trolling both of us, mummy for watching a serial and me for..... Wait a second, subhaaa hote hi matlab?" - Yuvika was dumbfounded

"Matlab wohi Jo tujhe samajh aaya, I am genuinely praising you for your late night activities" - Neil replied with a naughty smile

"SHUT Up Neil" - Yuvika threw her pillow on him & moved towards the washroom


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Precap :

NeiVika meeting Digvijay Mahajan smiley15

Edited by A_for_Arpita - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#58

res

this time i will read and comment on weekend

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Posted: 1 years ago
#59

Ohhh....

NeiVika as a married couple are bliss...that intimacy, comfort,abandon that marriage brings, when you are not scared to express your feelings in raw form of words...You captured it with beauty..smiley27

Such sweet NeiVika trademark moments...YUVIKA ruffling his hair, him pulling her closer, Yuvika's temperature rising, him being such a tease...Ohh NeiVi making processsmiley43,YUVIKA is bold...

I was blushing throughout.....

" Swastik production heroine,her maa watching it, Neil teasing them"Hilarioussmiley37

Ok so First part happened exactly like the previous chapter??? Bhumi didn't change anything bcz she was more concerned for Neil?

That's intriguing, I am very much interested in this aspect You are keeping the mystery intact...though it was confusing but I know you are building this confusion intentionally...

So eagerly waiting for the next chapter...Loved itsmiley27

Posted: 1 years ago
#60

Chapter 2 is hilarious smiley26

Nice trolling of the PH toosmiley37

So is DJ evil in your fanfic?smiley36

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